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@Faerie Got a Nightmare Rag Doll from a 14 letter and Never mind that that's last years >__< FYI SkitsoSquirrel's UN is actually 14 letters long. :3

Link to 2011 new ToT item list and who gives out what. UPDATING

@Sprig Got hexed once and got a
Tiny Morostide Bat Plushie
Tiny Morostide Bat Plushie

Link to TOT here for RAGDOLLS and PRIZES that include CSC

Can you add me as a 5 letter name, please? :3 Happy ToT'ing guys!

Link to 2011 new ToT item list and who gives out what. UPDATING

@Alkuna Thanks very much! There's a quite a few items in your list that would be perfect. Yeah, it's hard, I kind of jumped the gun because the first album for Rufus Rex just came out, but... yeah. xD Still, those are awesome items, thanks again!

Link to Rise Lazarus Rise: TC Help Needed for Rufus Rex

Do you like the morbid and grotesque? Do you like reanimation and tales of mythic beasts? Do you like music that fulfills your need for the creepy? Are you looking for something to add a new kick your Halloween song list? Then you should be listening to Rufus Rex and Creature Feature. Creature Feature had released their first album, The Greatest Show Unearthed, in 2007, and their second album (It Was a Dark and Stormy Night...) is coming out this October 28th! Click here to hear one of their newest songs from their upcoming album, The Unearthly Ones and check out their other music at their Youtube channel. Rufus Rex is the side project of Curtis RX from Creature Feature, and contains morbid, gruesome, grisly, and creepy imagery combined with a much more rock-based style. The Rufus Rex debut album, Dead Beat, is officially released October 11, and will be available for ordering at the Rufus Rex Website. There was a pre-order and I managed to get it and it s amazing. There are seriously no words to describe it. The songs already released were good, but the songs that weren't released are so amazingly good it is ridiculous. Here's a sampling of Rufus Rex: My personal favorite, the song of reanimation: Rize Lazarus Rise and the radio song for the end of the world: Dead Air. I'm honestly hoping to meet others who share the Creature Feature and Rufus Rex love. I'm sure someone on here does, I just need to find them. Hope any newcomers enjoy what they hear.

Link to Rufus Rex + Creature Feature: Halloween Essentials

Yes, I am indeed hoping that someone out there in the grand world of Subeta recognizes Rufus Rex song titles and comes to my aid. Rufus Rex is my fanpet for the music of Rufus Rex the side project of Curtis RX from Creature Feature. He's based off of their songs, and yes I know the album is still not 'officially' released but I got my pre-order in the mail two days ago and I can't stop listening. You don't really need to be entirely familiar with the songs, as his story isn't exactly similar to them. Before this goes off on a longer tangent, let's get to the meat of the matter: Rufus Rex (the pet) is an explorer who is searching for the secret to cheating death - the technique to reanimate the dead. His explorations lead him to forsaken temples, lost cities, and to underwater caves in distant reaches of ocean. Unknowingly, in the course of his travels he unleashes an ancient evil, which follows him as he sojourns onward, growing stronger and beginning to wreak havoc in the places he goes to as it does. His dreams have taken a nightmarish turn, and he sees himself surrounded by legions of demons, tentacled titans, and beasts of legend and myth, who torture and play with him until he wakes again. (I imagine his world being slightly steampunkish, fashion being around the end of the Victorian era, and as his story progresses things get very morbid and distressing) (This is heavily based on the lyrics and design of the Rufus Rex album, Dead Beat, so I cannot take full credit for the above, just sayin'.) Anyways, his current Wishlist is here: Rufus Rex TC I just wanted to ask if anyone can take a quick look to see if the items I have work with the story, and maybe suggest items that I don't have yet? Thanks very much for your time guys! <3 #PTC #petaddicts

Link to Rise Lazarus Rise: TC Help Needed for Rufus Rex

@Ceph All right, just checking. It's no problem, you can get the info over whenever you're ready. :3 Sure, I can get you the 100px version instead, that isn't a problem.

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Nicholas Ahahaha, that would be a good idea. xD I forgot about payments. All right, here's the trade: Lot #5020045 Pay whenever you're ready. Thanks much! @Camaro Whoop, forgot about setting up the trade for payment. No rush, pay whenever you're ready. Lot #5020045 Thanks!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Nicholas I don't know why I didn't respond to you earlier, I'm sorry! I can definitely do that, I'll have something for you in the next couple of days (or sooner depending) xD @Camaro I'll definitely love giving her a try. Golden Tigers are amazing. I'll toss some sketches your way soon. :3 @Ceph Hey, just wanted to clarify, did you want both the Pet Thing and the CI to be of Vandamere? Just wanted to make sure. <3 you guys

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Ceph Thanks very much! I'll have something for you in the next couple of days. Oh man trusting my artsy creativity! xD I hope you'll enjoy what I come up with. Thanks again for the opportunity. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Ceph No problem, I've had problems like that before. Oooo I love Vandamere's design. I'll have a lot of fun with it. I love crow characters so much. <3 And sure thing, I've put you down for a CI slot as well, so feel free to give me your info whenever you're ready. Thanks for ordering again, I really appreciate it! <3<3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

Dapper Jollin Sticker
It's up in trades as: Lot #5019304 I'll be accepting 30 mil SP on it. First person who bids gets it! Thanks!

Link to Selling Dapper Jollin Sticker

@Camaro 8D OF COURSE <3 What would you like?

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Nicholas Haha, no problem. I enjoy drawing, and I have fun drawing for you too, so it's all good. :3 Let me know what you'd like.

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Nicholas I'm glad you like it! #hollo Hey guys, if anyone wants to order, now's the time. Slots are open so let me know if you want anything. :3 Much <3 to you all!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Camaro Oh wait, I forgot the markings color on that palette! Here is the updated one: Xati yay xD It is no problem, I had lots of fun. Thanks very much for giving me the opportunity. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Camaro 8D I'm really happy you like it! She was lots of fun to work with, I'm glad you like the colors! Here's the alternate version you asked for: 600 * 900 Do you still want less stripes on the tail or is that good? And here's the palette: Xati Palette Thanks again for ordering, I had a lot of fun with this. :3 <3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Nicholas Like this? :3 And it's not a problem! I aim to please. I'm really happy you like it! @Camaro Here you go! Let me know what you think, and if you want anything changed or fixed let me know. 600 * 900 Let me know if you'd like a color palette as well. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Camaro I got some color sketches but help me out haha. xD I hope you like what I have so far, but I've been having a bit of trouble incorporating more browns into it. I don't know, it looks very ocean-y to me. There's a darker blue at the legs and nose and tail tip that fades to a lighter blue at the body (sort of like siamese points). I have the mane fluff a darker purple/lilac that fades to a lighter lilac as it reaches the end of the tail. Color sketch And here's some lines just because: Lines Let me know what you'd like changed, fixed up, etc. :3 ETA: @Nicholas Hey, let me know if this is good for you. :3 @AnimalzRForever Here you go! If you need anything changed or fixed let me know. Thanks guys! @Ceph Let me know about the Hooded Crow, I just want to be sure you still want me to do it. :3 #hollo CIs are open again if anyone wants them! :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Nicholas Hey, sure thing! Your description reminds me of the Khao Manee cats, they're pretty much identical to it. xD And so cute! I'll get it to you within the next few days I set up a trade for payment, no rush, whenever you're ready: Lot #5018697 Thanks! @AnimalzRForever Sure thing! So you want a CI of one of the real pets in your sig, right? If that's so, then I would totally love to do a CI of Cinderfella, I never get to draw bunnies and he just looks adorable. Would that be all right with you? I've set up a trade for payment and you can pay whenever you're ready: Lot #5018698 Thanks much!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Izaya Hope you like it! If there's anything you'd like fixed or changed, just let me know. It was my first time drawing sushi. xD Thanks much! @Ceph Did you want me to do that Hooded Crow? Is it just based off of a regular hooded crow or do you have some additions to the design that you'd like me to make. :3 #hollo Sorry I was a bit slow, guys! Got a cold and felt just plain icky, ugh. Anyways, CI slots are open if anyone wants to snag one, will be working on the current Pet Things first before I do the next CI orders, just so you know. :3 Thanks! <3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Gary OMG that is adorable. xD I love it! Thanks so much! <3

Link to GARY ART (SP AND USD)(Closed)

@Nicholas Let me know if this is good for you. :3 If you need any changes, just let me know. @Camaro Is this good? :3 600 * 900

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Ceph It's almost done! I'm excited, I should be finishing it soon. :3 You know, I would really love to do a crow, and Hooded Crows are just so pretty, so if you want me to I would totally jump on the chance to draw that one. :3 Here's the lot for payment: Lot #5014438 @Camaro I am really so happy you like him. I started with a different pose, but scrapped it because it seemed too static (and I couldn't get one leg to look right, haha) but I liked this pose much better. xD Glad to hear you like it! <3 I'll get sketching! I'll give you examples once I get a few down. :3 I've set up a trade : Lot #5014439 But feel free to hold off on payment until you at least get the sketches. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Gary Hey there, I was wondering if you'd be willing to draw this guy for me: Creature Feature. Would you be able to draw him looking a bit creepy (like a little off-kilter) and with a cup of tea somewhere next to him? And would you be able to make a transparent background? Let me know if you can, and when I should pay. :3 Thanks!

Link to GARY ART (SP AND USD)(Closed)

@Ceph I am really, really happy you like it. :3 Yeah, sure! I just did yours x2 since I think Camaro might be getting the second slot now. I'm not going to officially open slots up again until I finish all pet things and CI's so that I don't have anything hanging over my head. xD I'm actually working on Bashid's right now, I've come up with an interesting pose (to draw for me, haha) so I hope you'll like it. :3 Did you want to get Sheggorath's done, or someone else's? :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Camaro Got yours ready. Let me know if there's anything you want fixed or tweaked. :3 600 * 900 It was fun! I hope you like it. Oh, and would you like me to get started on your other request? I can sketch and do a few color tests to show you if you want, so you can see if the colors are working the way you want. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Izaya Sure thing, that'll be fun. :3 I've put you down for a slot and I'll get it to you as soon as I can. I've set up a trade for payment: Lot #5012203 Thanks much :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Ceph Augh, I can't believe I forgot the glow >__< Here you go! Let me know if this works or if you'd like me to toy around with it more. :3 I'm so, so happy you like him! It was fun working out the pose and look for him. <3 @Nicholas Oh my goodness that will be adorable. xD I'll do my best! I've set up a trade for payment: Lot #5012183 Thanks much!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Nicholas Sure thing! Just let me know what you'd like, and I'll set up a trade for payment. :3 I've put you down for a slot.

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

#hollo CI Slots are open, in case anyone is interested. :3 Pet slots should be open by the end of the week. @Kayarli I got your mole for you! I know you won't be back for a little while, but I'm putting it here so you can see it when you get back. :3 Hope you like it! @Ceph Awesome, I really like Bashid's look! It'll be fun working on him. I'll be working on the Pet Things tomorrow and Friday so I should have it done soon. :3 Also, I got your own for you! Luna Moth wings do not like being put in boxes, haha. xD Let me know what you think, if you'd like me to tweak colors/position/do something different let me know and I'll get it done. :3 It's a .png on a transparent background.

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

ATTN: People! I have made an art group forum ping thing #hollo Join it! I'll ping it whenever slots open up or when I have new info to put up. :3 Thanks! @Ceph That sounds like an awesome minion. I can definitely try my hand at it, owls and luna moths are just both such cool creatures. And yeah, I can do a Pet Thing for you too! I've put you down for both slots right now, so if you'd like give me the info for the Pet Thing go right ahead! I've set up a trade for payment: Lot #5011111 I'll get started on these once you pay. :3 Thanks much for ordering! @Camaro Oooh, both very cool chars. :3 Would it be all right if I do Juryn first, and Xati second? I want to play around with the color scheme a bit before I commit to drawing her for you. With that awesome design I want to try to make the colors just as awesome. I'm going to do my CI orders first, to get those out of the way, but I should have Juryn done for you by the end of the week. :3 @Marybeth I'm really, really glad you liked it! I had so much fun drawing him, you don't even know. xD <3 @Nicholas It's no problem. :3 And thanks for the question! I went and made a ping group so you can join #hollo and I will ping it whenever slots open. @Bree First of all, Nickolai is amazing. I love snakes so much. <3 I would really, really love to draw him for you! I should be getting done with things by the end of the week, so if you'd like join the ping group and I'll ping as soon as I open a slot up. Thanks very much for your interest!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Ceph Oh man thanks I'm glad you like them. There is still one CI slot currently open, so if you'd like you can go ahead and put an order in. :3 @Camaro Your turn! Go ahead and let me know what you'd like. :3 I've got a trade up for payment: Lot #5010859 Let me know the details and I'll get started once payment goes through. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Miasma Here you go! I hope you enjoy it. :3 Let me know if there's anything you'd like tweaked or fixed, and I'll get it done. 900 * 600 Thanks again! @Marybeth And here's yours! Let me know how you like it, if you need anything tweaked or changed, just let me know. :3 900 * 600 Thanks much!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Kayarli OOooh I have never drawn a mole before, but they're so adorable. I can definitely do one for you. I've put you down for a slot and should have it done for you by tomorrow. :3 I've set up a trade for payment: Lot #5010611 I just looked up star-nosed moles and those things are freaky. Cool but really freaky. o__o

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Camaro Thanks for visiting, haha. xD I've reserved a slot for you and I'll ping or comment you when I finish my current orders, all right? :3 @Totodile No problem. xD That happens to me too! Let me know how these work for you. :3 600 * 900

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Mist Here ya go! 600 * 900 If you need anything tweaked or fixed just let me know. :3 Hope you like it!

Link to Lock please?

@Marybeth @Miasma Thanks guys! I'll get these started tomorrow and get them to you soon. :3 @Totodile Here's the fixed version! Sorry about that again. 600 * 900 Hope you like it! Of course, if you want anything tweaked just let me know. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Totodile OMGOODNESS okay no, I will totally do that ASAP. I'm so sorry. I don't know how I missed that in the HA ref you gave me. I'll get it to you soon! <3 @Miasma Sure thing! I'll get it to you in the next few days. I've set up a trade for payment: Lot #5010166 I'll get started once payment goes through. Thanks much! :3 @Zephayer I've got a slot reserved for you! I can wait the few days if you want. Actually, that might work well since other people have now been ordering, I'd have some time to finish their orders up. x3 If that works for you, then just let me know when you get the ref done and I'll get on it. @Marybeth That sounds like a lot of fun, I can definitely do that for you. I should have it done in the next few days. :3 I've set up a trade for payment: Lot #5010170 I'll get started once payment goes through. Thanks much!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Totodile Really glad you like it! Did you want the stars on his scarf more visible, or the highlights in his hair? I can do either/both I just got a little confused so I don't want to make the wrong changes. :3 @Zephayer I can hold a slot for you if you'd like. :3 How long would you need? Ilario is really cool looking, just wanted to say that. xD @Miasma Oh my goodness that is adorable! Sure, I'll take a stab at it. How big would you like the pic? I usually work around a 1000x800px sized canvas, usually size down to around 900px when giving people their images. Let me know if you need a different size. :3

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Totodile Here ya go! Let me know if there's anything you'd want fixed or changed. :3 Thanks much! 600px * 900px

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Mist Awesome! I'll get started and get it to you in the next couple of days. I've got a trade up for payment: Lot #5009912 so just pay whenever you're ready (you can wait until you get your art if you'd like to, in this case). :3 Thanks much!

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@Mist Hey there, haven't drawn a griffin in a while and this guy looks pretty cool. I could give him a go, if you'd like. :3 Here's some examples: Badger GryffinDURR Recent Commission I have these going for 3mil right now. If that's cool with you let me know, I can get started for you. It might take day or two to finish, just so you know. :3

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@Totodile Definitely! He sounds like a neat character. I've put you down for a slot. If I run into any questions while I'm working I'll let you know. :3 This will be fun! I should have him done by the end of the week, the latest. I set up a trade for payment, Lot #5009370, bid whenever you're ready. :3 Thanks much! @Indigo Did you say... coati? 8D Yes. I am most definitely interested and I would most definitely love to get that done for you. I've put you down for a slot and I'll get this done for you as soon as I can! I really really love coatis, so this'll b tons of fun. I've set up a trade for payment: Lot #5009371 bid whenever you're ready and I'll get started. Thanks much!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

Hello there. Do you like art? Do you like buying art from strangers on the internet using virtual money? Well I hope you do, because I'm opening up shop. Currently only a couple styles, but we'll see how that goes. If you want to keep track of open slots and stuff, join #hollo ! It's the SuperHappyFunTime Art status group and it is also really easy to remember the ping for. Custom Items: OPEN Finished: Price: 1mil SP Slots: 1. Ceph 2. -open- Pet... Things: CLOSED Badger GryffinDURR Finished: 4 Indigo * 4 Totodile * 4 Miasma * 4 Marybeth * 4 Camaro 1 * 4 Ceph * 4 Camaro 2 Price: 3 mill SP Slots: 1. Nicholas 2. Ceph 3. Camaro ** ReSERVED - Zephayer** Payment on Confirmation - when I confirm I'm taking your order, please pay and I will get started after you pay. Only two slots open for each at a time. Please allow 3 days to finish on CI orders and up to 1 week for Pet Thing orders. Please include an image and good textual reference for what you'd like in a post below and remember to ping me! Thanks much for your time guys!

Link to SuperHappyFunTime Art: CIs/Pet Things: OPEN

@Firebolt I'll take it

Link to [S] Merana Things, Wearable Things, Things things [!!!]

@Firebolt What would you be willing to take on the Sea Glass?

Link to [S] Merana Things, Wearable Things, Things things [!!!]

Very, very exciting! To think, one day they'll have the equipment to discover if there really is water on there, and how habitable it is, and whether anything is growing there... This is stuff sci-fi dreams are made of. :3

Link to Second 'Earth' Discovered

@Kayarli Thanks much! I'll add it to my list. :3

Link to Badgers! For a TC

Hey there people, trying to find badgers (minions, items, plushies) for a new pet I'll be getting done over the next few days. So far I found these two:
Badger Plushie
Bumblebadger
And I started looking through items manually but obviously it's mind-numbing and deathly, haha. xD Does anyone know if there are any badger-esque items, minions, plushies, etc still out there other than those two above? They're not exactly close to what I'm looking for. I know there have to be more badgers out there! I could swear I saw a few once, but I can't remember their names. I mean, we can't only have two badger things on here. o--o Thanks much!

Link to Badgers! For a TC

I'm both yay and hrm about this. I really, really, REALLY like the idea, but like Whytekatt said, 10 of the same item? I can see it being used in cults, groups of friends, contest prizes - but what if you don't want to do that? It'd be neat to get a few different designs, but I don't know how much work that would be to code it. :3 I am really excited about this though. I can see myself saving up for this, definitely.

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@Meshurra I absolutely LOVE that glowy tail! It's so adorable. <3 *Note: Carcajou and Tithonus don't have overlays (the wip's at the bottom) :3

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Thanks much World! Hey #pet #petaddicts friends! Long time no Ping! I've been working on the stories to go on the profiles, and I'd like to ask your advice. :3 SlyDURRin\'s story is 'done', I can (and probably will) tweak it but it's got the jist I want going on. (It's got some animagus stuff going on there) I"d appreciate your feedback on it, whether you think it flows right and whether it keeps you interested enough to read all the way through it. GryffinDURR\'s on the other hand is only halfway so. I like putting a short blurb at the top, but I want to put a longer story-thing to give an idea of his personality and such. I had planned on doing an Animagus thing, like with SlyDURRin, but now that I think about it, it could be a bit redundant. So, I'm thinking of doing something else where he interacts with SlyDURRin? Maybe? A funny story to go with his cheery optimistic personality. What do you guys think? I also messed around with Gryff's info box a bit, how do you like that? Can you read the words or is the pattern a bit too distracting? Thanks again guys!

Link to SlyDURRin & GryffinDURR

WE HAVE PERSEVERED Celebrate the end of Subetageddon '11 by purchasing one of the awesome magnets, buttons, or keychains available here! <<<
There are a couple options to choose from of each item. :3 There are the zoomed-in version like the one above, or the Full version that will look like the image at the top of this post! All profits from these items will be donated to Subeta to help after this recent event. That's right. Nothing to me. All to Subeta. So if you feel like it, order away! Zazzle allows you to customize your orders, as well, so you can change the background colors on those certain items where you can see background colors. Go here and order!

Link to Subetageddon '11 Perseverance Keeto Items

Oh Subeta! Big hug to everyone on the team and all the awesome Users! You guys seriously rock. It's so great to be back.

Link to So happy to have Subeta back.

@NK Would a two-headed snake interest you? His main head is a grumpy, cynical, snobby venomous snake/basilisk mix and his second head is an absent-minded cheerful non-venomous snake head that likes chewing on the main head when it has nothing better to do. x3 Hope you beat your art block funk. Those are always annoying and not cool.

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@Shalashaska Thank you much! <3 Means a lot coming from you, your profiles/everything are just so awesome. o__o Haha, I'm sure there were plenty of people who just went 'meh' and passed right on by after seeing the title. xD I'm working on their stories/bio things so hopefully those will be up soon. I'm having way too much fun with these guys, ahaha...

Link to SlyDURRin & GryffinDURR

That is horrible. Why? What does it give them to beat someone like that? I'm glad to know Dane survived, but holy hell he shouldn't have had to go through that in the first place. I just... have no words. Words fail me at this moment. I'm hoping that police figure out who did this, soon, and that those people get the sentence they deserve.

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@Ravenclaw FFFFfff he's so adorable I wanna hug him. xD I love the subtle way the Deathly Hallows are included, and the layout is so elegant! <3

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@ROCK Argyle patterns like woah! Er, I mean if you want can you check the profiles out and tell me what you think? xD @DISTINCT Thanks very much! I just updated the way the profiles look, I'm hoping its a change for the better. xD I'll be working on the stories soon. @Chidiot Heheh, thanks much! I'm really happy you like him. He was lots of fun to design. :3 Not trying to be annoying (I swear) to #pet #petaddicts I updated the profile looks and I'd appreciate comments/critique if you guys feel like it. Thanks.

Link to SlyDURRin & GryffinDURR