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#721 :: February 24th, 2010 @ 7:11 PM

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Simple. But It's nice. c:
6/10
Maybe add some red at the bottom?

#722 :: February 24th, 2010 @ 7:27 PM

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9/10
It's really cluttered, which I like, but I dunno if there's enough white up top, and I don't really like the pelt. It doesn't flow very well.
Like it overall, though.

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#723 :: February 24th, 2010 @ 8:55 PM

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8.5/10.

While I like the idea, the "Eye Sore" zombie thing totally distracts me from seeing the potential of the Avatar. Unless you were trying to go for a monochrome look, adding some colors other than grey might add some variety. And finally the expression on the face. For some reason, I just don't like the eyes and the smile...but that could just be my personal preference.

There are some really good things in your HA too. I really like the theme you went on, and you did a really nice job creating it. With a few minor changes, it can be an amazing avatar.

#724 :: February 25th, 2010 @ 12:58 AM

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Your HA is AWESOME!

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It's rather interesting. I'm not sure what the HA is supposed to be with the rose and girly legs and the butterfly. But anywho... maybe a black wig? Or at least a darker hair to match?

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#725 :: February 25th, 2010 @ 1:48 AM

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I always adore your HA's bb !
I'm really liking the use of hair accessories with that wig, very cute. You make a pretty fantastic zombie ! I can't really think of much to suggest either ! But, if something comes up, I'll let you know !

#726 :: February 25th, 2010 @ 1:56 AM

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Yours are HOT. I don't have anything to suggest, it all matches and like goes together.

10/10

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#727 :: February 25th, 2010 @ 3:14 AM

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I love your ava! Everything matches great, and you make such a cute zombie!
Love it all 10/10.

#728 :: February 27th, 2010 @ 12:05 AM

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I like it a lot actually! It's rather dark but you are a zombie! Colors match great and I really truly think it's basically perfect!^^
Just one thing though the horn and heart blend in and when glancing over, it makes the horn look weird. Be careful about that, otherwise I love it!
9.5/10

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#729 :: March 2nd, 2010 @ 9:09 PM

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The only thing I would change would be the hair colour, you seem to have a theme of black and red, so maybe a black wig/hair colour would improve the overall effect?
8.5/10 though I really like your avatar

Last Edit by: Aluminum 3/02/10 - 9:11:30 pm

#730 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 1:06 AM

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I would remove the ear and the mirror

#731 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 1:10 AM

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9/10
I enjoy the colors, theme, and style of clothing

Just, I don't like the mouth.. I understand it matches the 'grinning or maniacal ringleader/performer,' but it irks me.

Maybe you could also change the nose.

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#732 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 2:36 AM

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9/10 I quite like the theme and overall style, but the eyes seem too chibbi for my liking and the flower doesn't quite match in colour compared to the rest of the outfit. It's simple and nice, and I love the necklace, hair and bangle combination especially ^^

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#733 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 9:25 AM

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Can't change the nose; I'm a zombie underneath the skin thats why my eyes look bruised and I'm grinning so manically.
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Your avatar is sweet! I like the escapee zombie desperado being chased by droids.

#734 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 10:55 AM

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Its cute =D
I have no suggestions I think its perfect.
10/10!

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#735 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 11:49 AM

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wow scary! i think its perfect the only improvement would be a backround but i think it looks effective without one

Last Edit by: Nikkidaydream 3/03/10 - 11:52:28 am

#736 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 11:52 AM

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9/10
I like the theme but i would take off the bow and mask since it doesn't really fit in, otherwise, i love it^^

Last Edit by: silvermist069 3/03/10 - 11:53:28 am

#737 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 12:18 PM

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I like the shirt, but I would change the hair and the face to a style/ color and expression that go better . Maybe remove the leotard undie thing and ad something gray near the chest area as well?

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#738 :: March 3rd, 2010 @ 1:48 PM

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i like the colors. 8/10

#739 :: March 5th, 2010 @ 6:01 PM

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@nonasianpride;
er, a bit wild dont you think? its cluttered, frankly a mess. 2/10 for the effort.

#740 :: March 5th, 2010 @ 7:14 PM

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8/10: i love the colour theme & the top half of your ha, but it think the legs are a little plain compared to the rest? c: maybe layer them up a bit.

Last Edit by: Charlotte 3/05/10 - 7:22:12 pm

#741 :: March 5th, 2010 @ 8:08 PM

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id get rid of the mask and maybe get a wig that went with the other colors better. 6/10

#742 :: March 6th, 2010 @ 5:30 PM

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it's weird that you have no nose nor body, that it's just clothing. i see what you were going for but it wasn't very well achieved. i suggest a body perhaps. 5/10

#743 :: March 7th, 2010 @ 6:52 PM

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@TAY, i really like the theme of your avatar, its clear what you are trying to go for. all the colors match well and the ornaments really add to the look. the only thing i don't like is the mouth, and that is just a personal opinion (i think it looks dull). /shrug, overall 9.5/10

Last Edit by: megawatt.lizard 3/07/10 - 6:53:45 pm

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#744 :: March 8th, 2010 @ 6:58 AM

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Ohhhh, very unique, 8/10-
I would not smile, some other mouth action maybe

#745 :: March 8th, 2010 @ 12:13 PM

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4/10

The color could use some pulling together, things like stockings will probably help. I also just don't think the hair is working out.

Last Edit by: Vael 3/08/10 - 12:14:31 pm

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#746 :: March 8th, 2010 @ 3:18 PM

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I'll play the one that's on his h e a are t;;

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I think you need to loose the dog-back end thingy, it doesn't match the rest of the outfit, and the lines are a lot thicker and less delicate than the rest of the outfit. Also, the dark hair doesn't work either, I think you need to colour it a bit lighter to match. Other than that I LOVE the matching of the roses, bracelet and corset, it has huge potential.

#747 :: March 8th, 2010 @ 11:22 PM

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@sarah_jane_smith lol maybe I'll make a second theme based on your input, but I really like what I made here. :3

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#748 :: March 9th, 2010 @ 9:35 PM

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you've got alot of similar colors, just none matching. Maybe pick two or three colors and zero in. But I do think that your hair matches, especially with the corset.
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#749 :: March 9th, 2010 @ 11:23 PM

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I love how colourful and bright your HA is. My suggestion is maybe some lip gloss on the lips.

Very cute!

9/10

For the next person - I'm looking for shoes to go with my HA, any suggestions??
I'm dressed very simply but I'm goin for my school teacher outfit!

Last Edit by: talz_ 3/09/10 - 11:24:57 pm

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#750 :: March 9th, 2010 @ 11:24 PM

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@ 7/10 I don't really see what you're going for.... I'd suggest getting more matching colours.

#751 :: March 10th, 2010 @ 7:41 PM

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8/10 it fits together well but the smile seems innocent while the clothes do not

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#752 :: March 11th, 2010 @ 1:23 AM

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I love the hair with the fairy outfit and the background! Very sweet!
My suggestion is a different smile! Looks great!

9/10

Last Edit by: talz_ 3/11/10 - 1:24:26 am

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#753 :: March 11th, 2010 @ 7:54 PM

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You've got a decent base with the dress, blouse, and hair, but everything else is nonsensical. Try some new accessories and makeup and see how that looks.

6.6/10

#754 :: March 11th, 2010 @ 10:16 PM

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Really pretty and most of it matches up really well. The hair doesn't really seem to match that well, the highlights are fine, but the rest of the hair seems too yellow I guess. Good job though!

9/10

#755 :: March 12th, 2010 @ 12:04 AM

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I love the top(s) with the necklace. I think it could use some arm and face items though. And maybe a belt.

8/10

#756 :: March 12th, 2010 @ 12:06 AM

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7.5/10 The middle of your avatar around the waist gets a little bit confusing/messy. But overall I love your colors.

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#757 :: March 12th, 2010 @ 6:15 PM

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er, your hair and makeup go really well together, but the rest needs some work. Try a different undershirt and maybe a cute belt and some jewelry.

6/10

#758 :: March 12th, 2010 @ 7:16 PM

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The colors and layering are very impressive, although the eye color and hair flower seem to throw it off a bit.
8/10

#759 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 1:31 AM

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I like it!

Remove the necklace and add some sort of arm bangle/bracelet/cuffs.
8/10

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#760 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 1:11 PM

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Very nice. Simple, yet memorable. But I'd try on a different hat. That one has an odd shape.

8/10