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#841 :: March 12th, 2010 @ 7:06 AM

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Hmm... There is something bugging me, I just can't figure out what it is... I think it's the way you made a more manly avatar and put female stuff around the head. Mostly the goggles and the lips though! Hope this helps!

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#842 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 1:04 AM

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Personally I don't like the ground item you have equipped because it hides your feet. I'd also suggest adding more white to the bottom of your avatar, since the top has so much pretty white and the bottom is mostly dark.

#843 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 1:24 AM

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The only thing I can think about is you need something small near your feet and your head. Your hair is just..there. Maybe a type of shoe or..I'm not sure lol.

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#844 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 1:26 AM

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Add a little of that yellow color onto the leg areas... Like stockings?

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#845 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 2:15 AM

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Wow. I really like it. I don't really know what you could add to improve it..Maybe a background or something? It's really well-done!

BTW! I didn't make mine. @ did.

#846 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 4:46 AM

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@ I think that it has a little too many different shades of blue, for example the fishes doesn't match the other blues at all. Try working on that.~

#847 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 12:38 PM

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Ah, well, the hair seems a bit out of place and rather odd looking. The leggings look kind of odd, for some reason, as well. Perhaps it's because of the skirt...?

All in all, I'd say it's a pretty good HA though. =D

#848 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 10:33 PM

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Your expression is really throwing me off. When I see creature in tube like that, I think alien. They're motionless, which makes them creepier because they're still but they look they could awaken at any second.

I'm thinking a more neutral expression.

#849 :: March 13th, 2010 @ 11:14 PM

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the wine color in the headband, mask, & slip do not match at all.
i would take off the headband, use a different color mask, & change the lip gloss.
or start over.
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#850 :: March 14th, 2010 @ 12:31 AM

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@duskshine
The hair layering looks a little tacky.. That's my main complaint.
Maybe also some sort of gold at the legs.

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#851 :: March 14th, 2010 @ 10:04 PM

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tacky? how so?
i know the colors in the hair don't exactly match, but it's as close as i could get.

& i don't know how to incorporate gold in the legs.
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#852 :: March 14th, 2010 @ 10:16 PM

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@duskshine
Uhm.. It's partially the hair color, partially not. I think the main problem with it is the difference in texture. The Soon hair looks smooth while the other looks more frizzy and rough. If it's a default hair, I think you could get it to match the Soon hair color.

I'm not too sure with how to incorporate gold into the legs either. xD Unless changing the shoes is an option, even though the shoes look great!

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#853 :: March 14th, 2010 @ 10:24 PM

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yeah, it's a default hair.
i have no idea what else to use.
&doing stuff on the legs is quite hard, since there's no knee layer.
there should be one.
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#854 :: March 14th, 2010 @ 10:27 PM

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@duskshine
Now, the hair looks much better!

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#855 :: March 14th, 2010 @ 10:28 PM

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thanks, i love how the hime hair layers under the soons.

but i'm still not sure about the color.

#856 :: March 14th, 2010 @ 10:31 PM

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@duskshine
Hmm.. I think blonde doesn't look that bad. Maybe black? <-dark color fanatic ._.

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#857 :: March 16th, 2010 @ 2:15 PM

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I REALLY like your avatar....I don't know what to really suggest. The hat looks a little awkward with the hair, but I love it...I would say maybe a background but nothing too crazy or it'll take away from all you've done so far...

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#858 :: March 17th, 2010 @ 11:00 PM

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No corset and a different colored mask. @

#859 :: March 18th, 2010 @ 12:38 AM

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@ something for the legs, they're too fair for the cream of the skirt

#860 :: March 18th, 2010 @ 2:50 PM

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Definitely a new Mask, Probably in a Brown or cream colour the Corset is Chic and Mysterious, and Matches Fairly well. Your necklace is a little odd, but Aside from that, you look nice.

#861 :: March 19th, 2010 @ 2:27 AM

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I find the sand a little strange. It looks likes she's dressed up for something and she's walking in sand looking really peeved off about something. Socks with shoes like that doesn't really work maybe some torn stockings instead. But it's interesting I like how the bow is going into the skirt acting as a top.

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#862 :: March 19th, 2010 @ 12:32 PM

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@ your Human avie looks awsome

#863 :: March 19th, 2010 @ 12:35 PM

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@StarRain
Try a background, something simple and darker than the clothes.
Also, try a different pair of shoes and maybe something for your legs.

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#864 :: March 19th, 2010 @ 12:37 PM

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@ awsome avie and thanks for the tips i am looking for shoes thad look good but i cant find them

#865 :: March 19th, 2010 @ 9:49 PM

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@ A more realistic pair or eyes, and a pair of shoes with just light pink in them. Also, the tan skirt has no place, a light pink or maybe even white with pink leggings might look better.

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#866 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 1:39 AM

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@Classic Your colour scheme is great! I would suggest a bit more black on the hair though? I'm not quite sure how to make your HA any better haha

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#867 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 9:31 AM

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@devilHEART i think the red on your body doesnt realy looks good with the green

#868 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 9:43 AM

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@StarRain
Thanks for the hint But I can't help that due to being a zombie and staying that way for an entire year :|
Your HA is lovely by the way The pinks all work well together although I recommend adding some pink to your hair.

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#869 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 9:46 AM

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@devilHeart -love it. The only thing I'd say is maybe get a guitar or wings that were a pastel blue or green to tie it all in.

#870 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 9:55 AM

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Thanks!
Your avatar is quite nice I like the colours and your hair looks great I suggest you use slightly smaller eyes though, your current ones look rather large :

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#871 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 12:14 PM

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@DEVILHEART hmm, I like the lower part of your outfit, but either the flower needs to be a different color or find a completely white flower instead. the bits of purple on that one stand out. so does your skin, of course... but I'm trying to ignore that

good start!

#872 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 1:15 PM

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@Gwynnedd
Great HA, not much to add to that, only if it were me I woould change the colour of the skin, its too white, maybe get tanned or get blue, that would be awesome! And you could also get a background, theres one that has a castle on the clouds that would match perfectly!
But Its great as it is already!

#873 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 4:30 PM

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I think you should add some red closer to the bottom of your HA to balance out your red hair :3
Otherwise, your HA is brilliant!

hands down, I'm too proud for love, but with eyes shut, you're the one I'm thinking of.

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#874 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 7:18 PM

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@tael- I really like yours. The only thing that bothers me is seeing the top of the stockings and the way the earrings layer over the hair. Otherwise it's really good.

Last Edit by: Michiko 3/20/10 - 7:20:30 pm

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#875 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 7:43 PM

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@Michiko
Thank you, is this better?
I think I need more pink around the legs, though, but I don't know what to use..
I love your HA, but it'd look even more fantastic if you added more grey around the waist, or something.

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#876 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 7:53 PM

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@Tael
You need more pink around your legs, but you already noticed that yourself. Maybe you could layer a pink pantyhose over it. Something else that's pink in the leg layer is fine too :3

#877 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 7:58 PM

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@Cure- great colors, looks like you just stepped out of one of those sepia tinted photographs. It has a good vintage feel to it. I like it alot 9/10

#878 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 8:07 PM

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@deathbringer66
You're HA is great, but I think the white highlites in your hair are a little bit off, but other than that, it's awesome! Oh, and your eyes are quite large O:

@Cure
How's this?
BAH, I can't find anything that's missing from your HA!
It's positively brilliant.

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hands down, I'm too proud for love, but with eyes shut, you're the one I'm thinking of.

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#879 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 8:10 PM

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@Tael
It looks quite good like that C:
And you might want to suggest something for the user above you 8D Skipping isn't nice P:
Aww, thanks!

#880 :: March 20th, 2010 @ 8:14 PM

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@Tael Are these eyes better

@Cure- sorry already rated.