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#1 :: July 20th, 2010 @ 6:34 PM

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Found an item with a misspelling or grammar error? Post it here!

Please include the name of the item and the error.

Pleasepleaseplease type out the name of the item instead of using item=, it helps me get things done a lot quicker. Thanks!

When the error you post has been fixed, I will delete posts mentioning the error. This will prevent multiple posts about the same mistake.

#2 :: February 25th, 2011 @ 4:49 PM

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Dirty Socks
"What a waste of perfectly good socks! Oh well, I'm sure you can still where them. Who's going to be looking at your feet, anyway?"
I believe where should be wear.

Field Kerubi Slippers
"Don't wear your slippers outside! This is what hap - wait. They're suppose to look like that."
Suppose should be supposed.

Arid Kanis Slippers
"So boring..slippers are suppose to be full of FUN =("
Same problem as above; suppose should be supposed.

Dawn Miniskirt
"Just the thing to send the messge: THINK PINK! "
I believe messge should be message.

Item not found: purple mittens
Purple Mittens
"A lovely shade of purple, and very styleish with all the beads, isnt it?"
Styleish should be stylish.

Eco-Friendly Green Apple Slices
"These apples arent grafts or clones. Their tree was grown from seed! The apples taste a little tart but they are an excelent source of vitamins C and A. Be sure to eat the skin too! Buy with confidence knowing the growers have been paid a fair price for their produce."
Excelent should be excellent.

Last Edit by: QueenSpazzy 4/22/11 - 8:00:14 pm

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#3 :: March 12th, 2011 @ 1:49 PM

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I'm putting this section in a spoiler because it's long and all of the items have the same error.

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A cute little Moose minion, eh? It has a loud bellow for such a small little fellow.
Moose shouldn't be capitalized.

Little Dear
Isn't this little Deer-like minion simply DARRRRLING?
Deer shouldn't be capitalized.

Lufi
It is a sweet little minion, but just don't get into his property or he might show a bit of an evil side; That carrot is HIS!
The T in that after the semicolon shouldn't be capitalized, or you could make the semicolon a period.

Wired Wabbit
This cute minion has had way too much Caffeine! Is your pet ready for him?
Caffeine shouldn't be capitalized.

Aljex
Shaggy like Mammoth, bearing horns like a Goat, and with a tufty little tail like a Rabbits, the Aljex is indeed a confusing little Minion to classify.
Should be: Shaggy like a mammoth, bearing horns like a goat, and with a tufty little tail like a rabbit, the Aljex is indeed a confusing little minion to classify.

Hyrus
This fierce looking Minion and somehow be a very loyal friend.
Description makes no sense... Could change to "This fierce-looking minion can be a very loyal friend."

Paaske
This dull looking seal like Minion is as smart as a empty peanut shell...
Should be: This dull-looking, seal-like minion is as smart as an empty peanut shell...

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Last Edit by: atechu 3/12/11 - 2:26:27 pm

#4 :: April 17th, 2011 @ 1:34 PM

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Stalwart

With it's impenetrable casing and enormous horn with minion will protect your pet from anything.

The second with should be this.

#5 :: May 13th, 2011 @ 9:52 AM

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Kumos Balloons

The description reads: A couple of Kumos Balloons. Lilac, Common and Field are the colours of the balloons. Don't collect to many of them, you might fry away, and hit the sun and BURN!

To should be too, and fry should be fly.

Spirit Wolf Dreamcatcher

The description reads: This dreamcatcher holds the spirit of the wolf. It will watch over you whole you are sleeping and protect you from your enemies, whether they be real or in your nightmares.

Whole should be while.

Last Edit by: ThunderFalcon75 5/14/11 - 10:00:02 pm

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#6 :: June 1st, 2011 @ 9:57 PM

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Sun Ruffie Plushie

All the cuddlyness of the real thing without the mess. And no poopers-cooper required! Now available in this lovely shade of sun.

pooper-scooper, not poopers-cooper.

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Also, Ghostly Ice Sculpture doesn't have a description.
ah. Saixmedrik beat me to it.

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Cream Malticorn Beanbag

These seemed to be a favorite of people and pets alike in SubetaBucks - so we've decided to sale them to everyone! It's even sented like fresh coffee

Two here. Scented, not sented, and sell, not sale.

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Dawn Kerubi Beanbag

This extra-squishy beanbag is one of the most comfortable ones out there. Even if you don't like dawn kerubi's.. the squishiness will make you like this.

Although the apostrophes show up great, there shouldn't be one in Kerubi. there also needs to be another . after kerubis.

Last Edit by: Asrodeia 6/01/11 - 10:30:18 pm

#7 :: June 18th, 2011 @ 8:18 PM

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Silver Fox White Toupee
Desecription: You don not come off so much a silver fox as some guy with a dead albino skunk on his head. Now that is the way to age gracefully!
don not > do not
However the first part could probably be worded more grammatically correctly..
I.e.: "You come off less a silver fox than some guy with____".

Hydrus Subeta Conditioner / Kumos Skull Faceguard
Description: Who doesn want hair like Merana? Seriously, use this.
doesn't

Kumos Skull Faceguard
Description: This helmet is made of an ancestors skull....
ancestor's

Telenine Skull Faceguard
Description: ........Worn in battle on a Telenine it makes them nigh Invincible.
Shouldn't the word 'invincible' have a lower case i?

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Last Edit by: Rista 6/18/11 - 8:22:41 pm

#8 :: July 11th, 2011 @ 2:50 PM

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This isn't a spelling mistake, but I thought it could fit here since it's just as minor. The image for Gray and Yellow Argyle V-Neck Sweater
appears to be a Graveyard Demi Plushie.

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#9 :: July 13th, 2011 @ 6:16 PM

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Fanboy Socks

*footwear

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#10 :: July 13th, 2011 @ 11:13 PM

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Yellow Goggles
The shy will look green through these!
Shy should be sky.

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La, la la la la la la

#11 :: July 15th, 2011 @ 5:55 PM

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Sun Endeavor Elixir

*too = to

Violet Scrap of Fabric

*out of you violet = out of your violet

Eyelash Curler

*Don't want to go to all the trouble = Don't want to go through all the trouble

Red Sunscreen

*Containing higly flamable = Containing highly flammable

Marsh Antlephore Beanbag

*site = sit

Ornate Yellow Flower Hair Clip

*Sorta of. = Sort of. OR Sorta. not both :p

Slumber Party Head BO xers

*Slumber Party Head Boxers ...not sure what was up with the random uppercase and a space.

Slate Cropped Pocket Jacket

*sombre = somber

Last Edit by: Pixiel 9/18/11 - 8:37:38 pm

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#12 :: July 15th, 2011 @ 9:03 PM

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Reinela

A mystical Minion that has an aurora trailing from all 4 of it's paws.
minion* four* its*

#13 :: July 23rd, 2011 @ 8:41 PM

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Compressed Sand Stone

"...makes A ROCK! No, my physics isn't flawed at all!"

It should say "No, my physics aren't flawed at all!"

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#14 :: July 23rd, 2011 @ 8:46 PM

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also

Should be Sandstone, if we're being technical

(geology ftw)

#15 :: July 24th, 2011 @ 12:07 AM

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Stalagmite

It may look though this rather spikey, cold Minion would like to dwell secretly withhin your freezer, sleeping atop your tay of ice cudes to keep cool, but this little fiend actually enjoys the toasty warmth it can gather by living in the crevices between your toes.

"Spikey" should be "spiky", "withhin" should be "within", "tay" should be "tray" and "cudes" should be "cubes".

Last Edit by: Rav3nNoir 7/24/11 - 12:09:54 am

#16 :: July 25th, 2011 @ 1:17 AM

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How to Make Spectrum Auras

"Ever wanted to learn how to Spectrum Auras? With this book, you now can!"

It should be "...to make Spectrum..."

Last Edit by: blue_espeon 7/25/11 - 1:18:13 am

#17 :: July 25th, 2011 @ 1:47 AM

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Green Pencil

This pencil have a super chew-proof eraser!

Should be "has" instead of "have"

Last Edit by: User not found (1): Saucisson 7/25/11 - 1:47:58 am

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#18 :: July 25th, 2011 @ 8:35 AM

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Red skirt
"...then you should definately wear it."
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#19 :: July 28th, 2011 @ 8:03 PM

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Bomb-Disguised Surfboard: That would be a surfboard disguised as a bomb. It SHOULD be 'Surfboard-Disguised Bomb.'

#20 :: July 28th, 2011 @ 11:45 PM

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The 'Lightening Mosaic Tile' should be a 'Lightning Mosaic Tile'

#21 :: July 28th, 2011 @ 11:46 PM

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I feel like this should have been mentioned before, but...

Item not found: tigerean machete
"Tigerean Machete" should be "Tigrean Machete"

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#22 :: July 30th, 2011 @ 3:55 PM

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Not sure if this has been caught, or if it's supposed to be spelled like this, but...

Shouldn't it be Defense Tag?

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#23 :: August 1st, 2011 @ 4:08 AM

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Fire Bubbles

"Magical firey bubbles that attack your apponent with intensive hot fire!"

"apponent" should be "opponent"

#24 :: August 2nd, 2011 @ 11:43 AM

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Item not found: full aries wig
Not so much a spelling error as a naming error. That one is the only zodiak hair piece that is called a wig.

#25 :: August 3rd, 2011 @ 6:48 PM

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Happy Bee Firework
"A loud, brightly colored fireworks that shoots off yellow and red sparks that spin in the air like a angry bees."

"Fireworks" should be "firework" and that "a" should not be there, as in, "...spin in the air like angry bees."

Last Edit by: ThunderFalcon75 8/04/11 - 12:49:49 pm

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#26 :: August 4th, 2011 @ 2:16 PM

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Red Comfy Slippers
'Suppose' should be 'supposed'.

Edit: I stumbled upon another.

Unadorned Precious Sword
'Shoud' ought to be 'should'.

Last Edit by: tripod 8/10/11 - 2:51:25 am

#27 :: August 4th, 2011 @ 6:33 PM

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Bloodred Donadak Plushie

Item description: Keep an eye on those hands, you dont want to loose them!
Lose > Loose!

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#28 :: August 5th, 2011 @ 2:50 PM

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Shrine of Nukum

Original: Nukum takes the name of King of Magma, and is of the same blood as Wokam. It is believed that when outraged, he has an uncanny ability to cause mighty eruptions to devastate everything around him! Be it friend or foe, Nukum has a hot temper and dislikes being taken advantaged of. He is always seen with his amulet no matter where he goes or what he does.

Should be: Anything to get rid of the passive voice/ending in a preposition.
May I suggest: and will not tolerate anyone taking advantage of him.
(Better also in that pretty much everyone dislikes others taking advantage of them. Sorry if this seems nit-picky but those are grammar rules and you have to admit the sentence sounds kind of ugly/juvenile as is.)

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#29 :: August 8th, 2011 @ 4:16 PM

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Swampie Floatie Toy
Quote:

One of the seeminly better crafted water toys, this one is a swampie! I bet your swampie will enjoy playing with a mini version of itself?

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#30 :: August 13th, 2011 @ 8:36 AM

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Chelow Kabab

Spelt Kabab on the item, spelt kabob on the description, and it should be spelt kebab normally.
I don't know if this was intentional, but it's spelt wrong, twice.

#31 :: August 16th, 2011 @ 4:49 AM

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Field Keeto Plushie

"He seems to have a green thumb. Wait, do Keeto\'s even HAVE thumbs?!?"

Should be:
"He seems to have a green thumb. Wait, do Keetos even HAVE thumbs?!?"
(No apostrophe needed, remove weird slashes)

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Atomic Kitty!

#32 :: August 17th, 2011 @ 4:54 AM

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Plasma Ball

Oooooo... its so memorizing... so captivating... so enchanting... I could stare at it for hours.... much like how I stare at my computer screen. Yeeaahhh.

I believe it should be mesmerizing instead of memorizing.

I felt a great disderpance in the Herp, as if millions of braincells suddenly cried out in terror and were suddenly silenced.

#33 :: August 17th, 2011 @ 6:41 AM

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Red Zombie Book

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#34 :: August 17th, 2011 @ 6:39 PM

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"What secrets saw you in starry eyes?"

Gold Plated Super Trout Shield
"odly" should be "oddly"

Also a mistake I noticed due to a previous post:
Stalwart
"it's" should be "its"

Devandril watches the shadow flying above on silent wings.

"Dragons," he says at last. "I see dragons, watching over a nameless child with violet eyes and broken wings...."

#35 :: August 17th, 2011 @ 7:45 PM

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Cumulus Marble

Description = "Wow, it's like someone caugh some real clouds!"

Error: Caugh should be Caught, if I'm not missing some word from my vocabulary (which I very well could be)~

#36 :: August 18th, 2011 @ 6:41 PM

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Sturdy Work Apron
This is for those hard working folk out side of the home, no girly sissy cakes being made here. All grease, oil, and sweat accent this study apron.

Study should probably be sturdy. (not really spelling or grammar, probably a typo)

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#37 :: August 19th, 2011 @ 3:30 PM

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"What secrets saw you in starry eyes?"

Psychic bubbles also has "apponent" instead of "opponent". It might be wise to check all the assorted bubble items.

This confirmed. Plasma bubbles has "apponent" instead of "opponent" as well.

Additionally, with fire bubbles, "magical firey bubbles" should be "magical fiery bubbles".

Devandril watches the shadow flying above on silent wings.

Last Edit by: shylarah 8/19/11 - 3:34:12 pm

"Dragons," he says at last. "I see dragons, watching over a nameless child with violet eyes and broken wings...."

#38 :: August 19th, 2011 @ 8:39 PM

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Orange Leopard Bottoms

"These snuggle against your hips are in the latest fashion of leopard spots!"

I'm not even quite sure what this was supposed to say, but it's not correct as is.

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#39 :: August 19th, 2011 @ 9:21 PM

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