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#1 :: May 4th, 2011 @ 10:32 AM

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OVER!! Please lock!
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So... yeah. I want you all to write me a good, sad, story that will make me feel all interested and my heart bloom. Hehe

So, you must write me a sad story, and:
-The story can be anything sad, the story of a boy that dies of cancer, the boy who was always sick and could never get up, the dog that dies after a long long while, an evil person with a miserable past, etc, etc.
-The story must have a sad ending.
-You may use the ideas above if they were your ideas.
-Join my ping group, #LP.

Three Entries Per Person!
You can send the story to me by sMail, on the forums, or put it on your pet's profile. Give me the link of the profile the story is on when its finished, please! By the way, the story can be about your pet

The winners will win:
Grand winner: 3m and

and

Runner up:

Everybody who sent in a story will get:
Some flowers and tokens

Deadline:
30/5/2011 When its reached the deadline, #LP, the group will be pinged as well as the winners, so be sure to join!

It's almost over! I'm going to start rating the stories now... #LP
Entries:
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3. User not found (1): zwitter
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7. (2 stories)
8.
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11. (3 stories)
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15. (3 stories)
16. (2 stories)
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Write away! ^^ Good luck!

#nachos

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#2 :: May 4th, 2011 @ 10:41 AM

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@Luminusy
are we allowde to submit a story we previously wrote? P:
interesting, tohugh, I might have to try~

#3 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 12:40 AM

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@Luminusy

I'm very interested. But I have bad details in my writing I'll try.

#4 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 7:25 AM

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Yarp, its all okay

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Good luck! ^^

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#5 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 9:29 AM

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Ooo count me in

#6 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 9:37 AM

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@Luminusy I joined your group in case I want to participate. #LBpings Interested anyone?

Level us up?

#7 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 9:54 AM

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@Luminusy

I joined. Uhmmm. how do i send the story?

#8 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 10:41 AM

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@Luminusy : Sounds interesting. count me in. Just as kittypop6598 asked, how do we send it and how long do you prefer?
By the way, I joined your group too.

#9 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 10:46 AM

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@Luminusy : I joined your group. Will try to write a sad story.
How do we send in a story?

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#10 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 12:48 PM

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@Luminusy

how many times may we enter?

#11 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 3:05 PM

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@Luminusy

how should we get the stories to you?
post here, smal, etc?

#12 :: May 5th, 2011 @ 5:26 PM

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@Luminusy
How should our stories be sent to you?

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#13 :: May 6th, 2011 @ 5:22 AM

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@ Aww, thanks, hun!
@PrettyRoses @tanya224 @ @ @ @ @ You can post it on a pet's profile. Or sMail me or put it here

Sorry, forgot to put that in. BTW, three entries per person!

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#14 :: May 6th, 2011 @ 6:03 AM

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@Luminusy

Ohh, okay..
I'll just post it here <3
Thanks for answering the question

#15 :: May 6th, 2011 @ 6:07 PM

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How long do you want it? Is there a Max/Min?

wl - sf
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#16 :: May 6th, 2011 @ 6:32 PM

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@Luminusy

What Musiica said c:

#17 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 1:48 AM

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There's no max/minimum. As long as it's a sad story, it can be short, super short, long, super long, etc etc.

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#18 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 7:51 AM

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@Luminusy

I haven't written anything like this in a while and I'm not sure how well I can do sad stories,
But I'm willing to give it a go (:

-starts typing-

-Why is the Rum always gone?

#19 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 7:52 AM

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Wish you luck! ^^

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#20 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 8:20 AM

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I hope you meant the 'no limit to length' .. My intro alone is already 245 words.. I'm really getting into this. I decided to write a story about my pet Nanukae and how he became Bloodred. (:

Edit:

513 words so far ... but it's almost 11pm here and I'm tired so I'm off to sleep, I shall finish this story in the morning (: ♥

Last Edit by: CaribbeanPirate 5/07/11 - 8:51:15 am

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#21 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 9:27 AM

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I shall certainly look forward to reading your story! ^^

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#22 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 5:00 PM

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@Luminusy

I joined your group. Now it's time to try and come up with a sad story, ya? *goes to wordpad*

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#23 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 7:04 PM

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I am definitely intrigued. As soon as I finish a few important tasks... like obtaining a present for my mother... I will get started. ^-^

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#24 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 9:49 PM

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Great! More entries

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#25 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 9:56 PM

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@Luminusy

Is it okay if it's a sad but sweet story? I can assure it's it's sad, as it doesn't really have a happy ending, but it's not exactly super depressing. I'm already 1168 words and not finished yet, but if I need to do a revamp I'd like to know :3

Enjoying myself writing this so it's no worries if I need to.

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#26 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 10:20 PM

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Its fine!

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#27 :: May 7th, 2011 @ 10:23 PM

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@Luminusy

Great! I'll probably get it finished by tonight or tomorrow~

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#28 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 2:56 AM

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@Luminusy
Sorry. I was planning on being finished by now.. But I forgot it was mothers day and got dragged out to see family for a few hours and it set me back.

I'm at 1,154 words at the moment, it probably wont be much longer cause I've got to work tomorrow -.- and wont have much time to write so I'll have to wrap it up.

But still, I'll either get it in tonight or before my lunch time tomorrow.

Edit:

Finished! 2,003 words. Now to find the best way to get it to you, should I just post it here? or would you prefer another method?

I hope you'll enjoy reading it.

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#29 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 4:51 AM

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You can just sMail it to me

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#30 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 5:33 AM

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@Luminusy
Uhm. You don't have the sMail button on your profile...?

Also, I apologise in advance for any spelling or grammatical errors there may be, as well as 'tense' mix ups.. as I said, I haven't written for a while and am a bit out of touch

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#31 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 5:55 AM

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Ah, sorry XD I do now!

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#32 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 6:00 AM

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@Luminusy

Sent it.
Could you please let me know if it came through okay?.. it should end with "He was Nanukae, and he was innocent no more."

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#33 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 6:21 AM

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It's great! I was like, "Ah, shoot, why did Layhe have to die?" But then when Nanukae became evil I was like HAHA

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#34 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 6:27 AM

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ♥
I was considering keeping Layhe alive, but it wouldn't be quite so devastating if Nanukae still had some family left. So I decided they all had to go. I tried to keep the deaths fairly light though - I tend to get dark with those sorts of things and I didn't want to take away from the main line of the story.

But anyway.. (:

-Why is the Rum always gone?

#35 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 4:39 PM

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I'll be trying this. It's an interesting concept!

#36 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 7:29 PM

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When is the deadline?

#37 :: May 8th, 2011 @ 9:50 PM

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I'm pretty sure the deadline is the 30th of May.

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Is that right?

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#38 :: May 9th, 2011 @ 12:21 AM

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#39 :: May 9th, 2011 @ 1:23 AM

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I am in!

I will get started on writing a novel for this ASAP!

There is no minimum/maximum word count/length is there?

#40 :: May 9th, 2011 @ 3:14 AM

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@luminusy
I would really like to enter. I wrote something a while back, but I'm going to revise it, change the characters around and then submit it. I'll be sMailing it to you.

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