Bastien; Character Development *HELP WANTED*

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#1 :: July 31st, 2011 @ 9:09 PM

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This guy is not nearly done and is merely just in the first step of his creation.. I encourage all of you to nitpick all you want!
So, without further adieu..

Name: Bastien
Age: 4 years
Gender: Male
Breed: Timber Wolf

-----------------APPEARANCE

Height: 4' 2", from the shoulder down.
Weight: 170lbs

Strengths: Large in stature accompanied with Brute strength

Weaknesses: Slow moving, Clumsy, Slightly deaf in right ear

Written Description:

Standing 50 inches at the shoulder weighing about, if not more than, 170 pounds; Bastien was used to being the largest and strongest wolf in his former pack. He consistently looked down on the other wolves, causing his neck to settle into the fashion of hunching. His face countenance is rather hefty in it's big size, carrying extra fat around his cheeks. A large thick snout and well-muscled jaw shapes most of his face. Set just above his muzzle, two small orbs burn a brightly lit burnt yellow, wide open in excitement, though usually hooded by his droopy lids, leaving his expression to appear apathetic. His great ears are carried atop his skull, rounded at the tip and highly capable of expression. Just the opposite, unless effected by a strong emotion, is his tail which hangs about 25 inches in length.

The coloration of Bastien's dense coat holds a palette of greys and whites, and carries bluish-grey tones throughout; noticeable in his cheeks, and the entirety of his back. Dingy whites, sometimes accented with a faded yellowish hue take place lined around his eyes moving downward around his snout, underbelly and down his legs. Along his back he has a mixture of grey's laying off his side 'like a saddle', accented with amber highlights. This pattern extends up the back of his head and over his forehead, leaving a dark amber tone at the base of his ears.

His strong, monster paws support his bulk standing firmly on the ground and his stocky legs are thick and exceptionally muscular. His mere size and weight account for Bastien's slow movement though when he breaks off into a run, he harbors vast stamina and when provoked he will stop for nothing. Although, this great asset he retains is no doubt thwarted by his laziness.

-----------------PERSONALITY

Strengths: Curious in nature, Humorous, Playful, Strong-willed

Weaknesses: Stubborn, Deceiving, Fearful, Indecisive, Immature
Suffers from Claustrophobia; fear of being in enclosed or narrow places, and Acrophobia; a pathological fear of heights

Personality:

Even though he has lived for 54 full moons, and this wells shows in his countenance, Bastien is much in tune with his puppyhood. His clumsy and immature nature has got him in trouble with his former pack and now that he is a loner with other wolves he comes into contact with. Bastien copes with his loner status although he wishes every night he could be back with his old pack and sorrow fills his soul until he shakes himself out of those feelings, intent on forgetting the entire affair.

Bastien also has a fearful nature, keeping away from narrow places and becoming nervous around other wolves. Despite that fact he is still very curious and impulsive and will venture off far away not knowing where he is going only that he must follow the path his heart has set.

He tends to domineer those around him, his size goes to his head sometimes, though in general he is very gentle and amiable. In fact, Bastien loves to make others laugh but gets ahead of himself sometimes and finds it hard to know when enough is enough.

-----------------HISTORY: WIP

Last Edit by: User not found (1): Rizey 7/31/11 - 11:21:48 pm