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DMC FanFic : Critique Please~!
#1 :: December 14th, 2011 @ 12:05 AM
Jinx.W
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An Original FanFiction.

Original plot, and a few original characters. No stealing or I'll send someone not nice after you.

I would love to hear any and all thoughts on the chapter to far. I'm looking to improve my character appeal and the flow of the story. I have a hard time with grammar so please let me know if you see see anything grammatical. This is my First FanFiction though I have been working on it for some time.



Disclaimer: I do not own, Devil May cry (video game or anime) nor do I make any money off of it or this reproduction.

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Dancing with Guns and Swords
: A Devil May Cry FanFic :



Jazmin finds herself attacked in the middle of the night only to be saved by a mysterious man in red. When she is thrust into Dante's crazy world, how long until she becomes apart of it herself.

Genres:
romance, action, fantasy, adventure, supernatural

Warnings:
Will be posted for each chapter/part along with ratings.

Characters:
Dante, Jazmin (OC), Jenkins (OC), Nathen (OC), Lady, Trish, Patty, Morrison, Nero and Virgil.

Chapter One, Part One

Last Edit by: Jinx.W 12/14/11 - 8:08:27 pm

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