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#1 :: December 21st, 2011 @ 2:46 PM
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Rules and Guidelines
1. Ping me on this board to ask for a slot
2. Once all 10 slots are filled, I will ping you with a trade.
3. Once the CSC is collected, I'll send in the item. If the item gets accepted, I will send it to you directly.
Please ping me on this board to let me know once you have received the item so I can confirm it got to you.

About Reselling These CW's...
I know some people don't know how to feel about reselling CW's. Personally, once the item is in your possession I feel you can do whatever you want with it. It's the same as any other item on Subeta. Feel free to sell it for triple the price you bought it if that's what you want. I don't mind at all. I'm just happy knowing people enjoy the item!

Thundermouse Hoodie



F / M

Desc: This hoodie seems to have a lot of static electricity.
Item Image: Still making it
Position: chest
Price: 600csc per slot
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Intriguing Robin Egg


Desc: What a pretty colored egg!
Item Image:
Position: Head
Price: 600csc per slot
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Rusty Steamed Locks

Desc: Do you hear gears turning?
Item Image: Still making it
Position: Head
Price: 600csc per slot
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Heavy Navy Scarf

Desc: This scarf has never actually been in the Navy
Item Image: Still making it
Position: Neck
Price: 600csc per slot
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WIP
Caged Hair

Desc: There is no valid argument against this hair
Item Image: Still making it
Position: Head
Price: 600csc per slot
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Last Edit by: Hippogriff 2/08/12 - 11:39:17 pm

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#2 :: December 24th, 2011 @ 10:36 PM
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That pikachu hoody is SO adorable! I wish I had the csc for it x3


#3 :: December 24th, 2011 @ 10:39 PM
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I love the scarf, but it doesn't seem to be sitting on the right shoulder very well...


#4 :: December 24th, 2011 @ 10:52 PM
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♥@creatureofhabit
Ah, I can see that.

Do you think this is better?

@Ebony
Haha, thanks

Last Edit by: Hippogriff 12/25/11 - 12:21:49 am

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#5 :: December 25th, 2011 @ 1:08 AM
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@Hippogriff
Can I have a slot for both please?




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#6 :: December 25th, 2011 @ 1:47 AM
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#7 :: December 25th, 2011 @ 9:48 PM
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I have a request, do you take requests?


#8 :: December 27th, 2011 @ 12:27 PM
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@Ebony
I don't mind taking a request although there is no certainty I'll be able to draw what it is you want x3

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#9 :: January 6th, 2012 @ 4:45 PM
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You should do something else steampunk! I love your art!


#10 :: January 21st, 2012 @ 3:46 AM
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@Hippogriff Hoodie slot if you're still doing it, please. And, yes, do some Steampunk! It would most likely go over quite well on here.


#11 :: January 27th, 2012 @ 2:39 PM
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@furby
Gave you a slot

Hmmm, what kind of steampunk stuff? I have a steampunk-ish wig

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#12 :: January 29th, 2012 @ 12:37 AM
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@Hippogriff Oooo, I'd LOVE to see (and most likely get a lot for) that! It will be big, what with the Masquerade coming up! EDIT: Ooops! XD Slot for Rusty Steamed, please.

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#13 :: February 6th, 2012 @ 6:17 PM
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Thanks, and sure thing

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#14 :: February 7th, 2012 @ 10:37 AM
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@Hippogriff Might as well keep at this until one of these fills. Intriguing Robin Egg slot, please. I think maybe the problem with the rusty steamed is that the back curl is sticking out a bit too stiff. Maybe if the hair was laid more against the back and it was just sticking out a little?


#15 :: February 7th, 2012 @ 12:27 PM
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@furby
Added you~

Hmmm, I see what you mean. I kind of like the stiffness but I'll play around with it and see what I can come up with that's better. I'm thinking of adding more steampunk stuff after these slots fill up more. Any suggestions would be great

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#16 :: February 7th, 2012 @ 3:49 PM
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Thundermouse Hoodie... add me


#17 :: February 7th, 2012 @ 6:19 PM
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#18 :: February 8th, 2012 @ 2:04 PM
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Maybe something like this ? The mismatched thing is kind of cool

AND LOL I LOVE THE CAGED WIG!
That's hilarious!


#19 :: February 8th, 2012 @ 3:01 PM
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@Ebony
I like that idea
I want to wait a little bit before making anything else though. There is so much to keep up with and I want these current items to sell first

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#20 :: February 8th, 2012 @ 9:53 PM
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Hey! I love the ideas but I think you're going to have to make the lineart a lot thicker. I've seen CWs with thicker lineart than that get rejected...o.x;

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#21 :: February 8th, 2012 @ 9:59 PM
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@Yujin
I thought my lineart might be TOO thick, haha
I can definitely redraw them with thicker lineart if you think it will improve them

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#22 :: February 8th, 2012 @ 10:06 PM
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@Hippogriff

Really? O.O Hum maybe I'm just having eyesight issues lol.

If you want more seasoned opinions, I suggest pinging # CWcritique?

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#23 :: February 8th, 2012 @ 11:32 PM
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@Yujin
I think you were right
I tried thicker lineart on my thundermouse redraw and it looks a lot better

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#24 :: February 8th, 2012 @ 11:34 PM
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@Hippogriff

I agree. (: You might want to thicken the lines for the robin egg too. ^^

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#25 :: March 3rd, 2012 @ 8:27 PM
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Hi there Just thought I would offer a little bit of feedback for your Thundermouse Hoodie. The hood seems to conform to the shape of the head a little too much. This is a good example to look at. Even on the side closest to us, the hood opens up so that the viewer can see inside. Also this is a good view to look at as well. The hood would be a little more hidden behind the cheek on the far side. The way it appears now it almost looks like a front-view instead of a 3/4 view.

For the shading I would perhaps try a deep shade of purple instead of a darker yellow. Shading with complimentary colors can really make them pop

Also, Yujin is right. You should thicken the lines on all of your item images. The site artists love to deny for lack of black lines. Make sure they're very visible I hope this helps you! And good luck :3

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