Any suggestions on how to improve?

#1 :: March 22nd, 2012 @ 4:57 PM

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My first real attempt to make a HA. Any thoughts? Critiques are loved!

#2 :: March 25th, 2012 @ 8:43 PM

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The mask is out of place. I suggest using a different one.

#3 :: March 25th, 2012 @ 9:41 PM

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Do you have any suggestions as to which mask to use? I'm...not very good at this obviously, haha

#4 :: March 25th, 2012 @ 9:45 PM

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Hmm,

might work or