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#201 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 10:50 PM
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Left big tail is slightly longer then the otherside. I think that you should more them either both to the front or both to the back otherwise it will be hard to layer correctly.

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#203 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 10:52 PM
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@fuzei-chan

I think it's tilted enough, though the ponytails look uneven, like the front one is higher and the hair is fuller than the one towards the back (not saying it is, it just looks uneven to my amateur eyes)


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@ fuzei-chan
I think you nailed the lighting beautifully this time, and the positioning of the right pigtail looks better now. It should be approved by now; I'm only curious weather it's possible for the right side of the bob to be tweaked a bit, as that might be what detracts from 3/4ths perspective as well.

I noticed the same thing Urd had mentioned, but they already posted it here. There's something about the colouring I am slightly uncomfortable with (the fact that the hair is coloured as if it's stiff - unless you were really going for the "hairsprayed" look.) It might just be a matter of personal taste though!

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#205 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:00 PM
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@fuzei-chan looks 'fixed' to me. It is quite darling, I wish I would have grabbed a slot for it.



#206 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:01 PM
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@hoar
thank you!
The lighting gave me so much trouble because this hair had such a complicated lineart .__.;
I ended up just creating a layer on top of the lines to do the lighting, and then just redoing a lot of the lines haha.

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@Urd
see, that's the problem. the original if you remember, had the two ponytails at around equal size, and on the same plane, because they're similar in size. But apparently that made the hair look like it was more frontal view, than 3/4 view :S
That might also be because the picture I posted was a little misleading, as one pigtail is behind while the other is in front. Please see the previews in this post and let me know your opinion!

And also @Cyn, thank you for catching that! That has been corrected. Though I don't think I can move the front pigtail to the back, since that's not really how the hair works. Though I can definitely see your issue with layering.
This is how the hair would look layered behind the body/clothes, and infront of the body/clothes:





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@Peelsa
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I will have another batch of these hair if there is enough popularity : )
Or if people drop out cause I edited the original so much haha...


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that's cause I can't actually color hair ;u;;;;;;
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#207 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:04 PM
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@fuzei-chan

For the perspective of the pigtails, look at the angle of the feet of the HA. Draw a straight line from big toe to big toe, and use that line as your guide. The HA's right pigtail (our left) should be slightly higher than the left. It will give a slight appearance of the left being 'longer' but it shouldn't be a stark difference. Just enough to give the sense of a 3/4 view.

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#208 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:04 PM
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I like the one with it behind better then the front, but both look lovely. I s can't wait to have this in my wardrobe!

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#209 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:06 PM
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@fuzei-chan
I know the feeling (although I personally always colour under the lines so I never go over them, but that might just be separate techniques, wweh. ;-; ) I had to scrap a loooong wig I did, because the lineart made it such a pain to colour with a cell-shaded style.
No worries though, it's lovely - but I don't really use wigs of this sort. I would be really interested on the part with a bob though!

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#210 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:09 PM
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@fuzei-chan ~ I like the wigs position which is at the very top of the first page. I don't think hair should be exactly even on either side...Just my opinion ~


#211 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:12 PM
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@fuzei-chan
I do understand, And I looked at it more closely this time around. I think what was throwing me off was the left ponytail (from the HA's perspective). It looks like the left ponytail is more tightly curled than the right one and the hair looks fuller which is especially evident at the top (you have more gaps in the hair to allow the background to show through). However I don't think you should change it. It makes the hair behave more realistically imo.

Also I prefer the hair layered in front of the HA instead of behind.


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#212 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:17 PM
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@celestialangel
oh, I see I see
/goes to tilt hair a little bit more
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@hoar
.....this hair:

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baw. a short, easy bob sounds like a lovely idea at this point.
I am so tired with the lines of this hair.
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@Cyn
thanks : )
I suppose it depends on how you want to layer it if you want the hair to go behind the body.


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#213 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:25 PM
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I love it can I get a slot
If there are any left?!

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#214 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:28 PM
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@fuzei-chan I doubt you will have any drop outs but if you do I would be interested I will keep my eyes peeled for a new batch.



#215 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:32 PM
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@Urd
ah I see what you mean. That actually did not occur to me when I was sketching out this hair
I will see if I can make more white show on the right ponytail and see if that looks better. Be back in a sec!

@toki-chan
at the moment, the waitlists are full. But there does seem to be enough interest at this point, that I will probably do another batch of the hair once it has been approved : )
thank you!

@Peelsa
aha, thanks!


oh, and for anyone who's interested, I made a white recolor of the hair, mainly for myself, cause I adore white hairs :')
This is very rough and the perspective on the hair has not been fixed.




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#216 :: March 30th, 2012 @ 11:38 PM
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@fuzei-chan oh nice and different I like it, I would love an interest/slot for the white if that would be ok?



#217 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 12:02 AM
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final version @Jennifer_790@;;;

made the white space on the HA's left side a little larger, so the hair looks "looser" @Urd
but not much, cause this hair is ginormous enough as it is.



@Peelsa
sure, I can reserve a slot for you if you're sure that you would be interested in the final product : )
I'm not sure if I want to open full interest lists since the last time I did that for all my items, it was a little chaotic. But a few people I can manage >w<




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#218 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 12:10 AM
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@fuzei-chan
I think it's beautiful, I still like it..


#219 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 12:11 AM
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aw, thank you very much! : D




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#220 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 12:11 AM
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@fuzei-chan ok hun I can totally understand that. I am sure once it is defined and finished I will love it, as long as the ends are not bright neon pink . If you prefer not to do the the interest list I will wait for a release ping



#221 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 1:05 AM
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... THAT IMAGE. xDDD
And I know, right? I'm not sure if I'll be able to afford it at that time, but skjdhfbndjfh. I'll be looking forward to it! 8D

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#222 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 1:14 AM
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@fuzei-chan
Sorry, was looking wrong or cross-eyed or something!
I really like the white and would want one if you release it!




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#223 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 1:16 AM
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oh my, I can see them
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#224 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 1:18 AM
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Is that the one w/the set that got released?



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#225 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 1:19 AM
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yes it is. The fixed up one, cause the original got denied due to perspective and lighting ;u;




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#226 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 1:19 AM
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It looks great! Can't wait to get it c:



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#227 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 1:21 AM
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#228 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 3:02 AM
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Oh, my. I just saw the white-pink version of the Hair. I love it. I hope I can grab a slot on that later as well


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#229 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 8:57 AM
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Oh it looks great, I love the changes ^^ and the white recolor is beautiful as well. I hope it gets accepted this time around


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#230 :: March 31st, 2012 @ 8:58 AM
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@fuzei-chan

Was the pink originally on the bottom of the pigtails?



#231 :: April 1st, 2012 @ 11:02 AM
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hey guys!
I'm thinking of trying my hands at backgrounds, but I have so many abstract ideas that it would be extremely difficult to narrow it down to just a few.

So I'm asking for suggestions of backgrounds that you would like to see.

You can give me as detailed a description as you like, or as vague an idea. I'm open for anything at this moment. This is just to gather inspiration and "interest" : )

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on the brown? Yes, there is a very faint hint of red : )




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#232 :: April 1st, 2012 @ 11:04 AM
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@fuzei-chan I would like to seem nice looking cemetery looking back grounds

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#233 :: April 1st, 2012 @ 11:06 AM
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@fuzei-chan I would really like to see a nightclub scene background. Like at a dance club. We don't have a really decent one on Subeta yet. I would love to be able to make a party girl HA and have her standing in a club.

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@fuzei-chan

No, I meant was the red ends added during one of the edits. I'd loved the dusky brown :/



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@Sandra
no, the dusky brown had a red gradient near the bottom too.
unfortunately the lighting did not work as well with the dusky brown, which was one of the reasons it got rejected :S

@chapstick
ohhh night clun scene *u*
It might be a little difficult to do, but noted~

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hmmm.... I think celestialangel made a cementary bg just a while ago.




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@fuzei-chan I don't think she did If she did I don't remember :/

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#237 :: April 1st, 2012 @ 4:24 PM
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#238 :: April 1st, 2012 @ 4:35 PM
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@WinterKISS oh okay but I don't remember seen that one though. Thought I would like another background that cemetery though

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#239 :: April 2nd, 2012 @ 11:36 PM
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about 2-3 layers of colors in. Far from being finished.

Before I go any further, would you consider purchasing this?

And as always, comments / critique / opinions are welcomed!

ps: ew photobucket resizes make lines look pixelated :S

pps: Thinking about adding a bit more white lace somewhere under the first "layer" of dress.

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