Futuristic Street Punk

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#1 :: April 18th, 2012 @ 9:49 PM

Blabbermouth

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For those of you who play Mass Effect, my HA is a young Earthborn Shepard. Sort of playing into the living on the streets, and having some sort of affiliation with the Reds, most likely as a simple thug/brawler.

For those of you who aren't familiar with the game, it's a futuristic street punk/brawler.

Think I encompassed the idea well? Thoughts or ideas on improvements?

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#2 :: April 21st, 2012 @ 1:26 PM

is a Mirage

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I don't play Mass Effect, so my advice is simply from the futuristic street punk assessment. :3
I like the smirk and how you layered the hair.

The only thing that bothers me is the background. The city's great, but I feel like the white behind it is distracting. Either a sky (day or night) or something else behind it would be lovely. Have you thought of facial piercings? :O Other than that, I've got nothing. c: Good job!

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#3 :: April 21st, 2012 @ 1:41 PM

Blabbermouth

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Neat idea, I'll try sky backgrounds. And she actually has a lip piercing, you have to look for it, though.
Thanks for the advice!

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#4 :: April 21st, 2012 @ 1:45 PM

is a Mirage

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/blind as a bat |D haha
I see it now. Maybe a nose piercing item then? ;o

(you can layer the 2nd item under the hair to avoid the ear bones c: )
You're welcome. :3

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Last Edit by: teatree 4/21/12 - 1:45:40 pm