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#1 :: May 27th, 2012 @ 9:53 AM

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Hi guys, some redline magic to spare? Flipping the image and sleeping on it for a week does nothing for me anymore, it looks the same both ways by now xD

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My perspective is bullcrap as always and it's going to take me ages to figure it out. I'd rather spend a week learning to paint curly hair (didn't even try yet) than twice as much moving eyes up and down, honestly wondering if I made it better or worse.

Not to mention it's exam month AND I have an overlay edit to finish. It just can't sit there tempting me to stare at it for hours.

I would really like to _{have someone} fix obvious mistakes in fundamentals before I put an insane amount of detail into it. ._.

Take pity on me? Pretty please

_{preferably before I turn tail and run pretending I've never asked, lol}
Any kind of feedback would be also welcome.

Last Edit by: Sapphira 5/28/12 - 6:25:43 am

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#2 :: May 28th, 2012 @ 10:00 PM

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@Sapphira - Looks like it's going to be a nice classic portrait. I like your style. Anatomically, I think the funniest looking part is the neck. The face isn't too wacky, but it does have some issues (esp the shape of the far eye):

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Good luck finishing the piece!

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#3 :: May 28th, 2012 @ 10:05 PM

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@Sapphira
I feel like the head shape and such while not 'correct' I guess looks fine but I think they eyes are a little off...the one farther from us seems to have the iris too far over as if both eyes are looking in a different direction.

#4 :: May 29th, 2012 @ 9:05 AM

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@, @

Thanks for the opinions, just what I needed!
I can see what's wrong now, finally. Felt like I was going blind, haha.

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