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single pigtail wig - help with my first CW
#1 :: June 29th, 2012 @ 3:02 AM
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I mainly want to know if it's worth a try to redraw or imporve this or if it's hopeless and I should just crawl back into the hole I've come from.



I'm not very experienced with digital art, so I'm aware this needs a lot of improvement. Any help would be very much appreciated.


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#2 :: June 30th, 2012 @ 2:57 AM
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@kodachichan
This wig certainly has potential after some serious work I believe.
These pictures should give you an idea about where the ponytail should be placed on the head (depending on how high the ponytail will be): example, example, example.

Obviously you will need to work on the lineart because it's extremely pixelated, but I'm sure you know that already.
It's a decent design, but with more work it can easily become a well liked CW.
I hope this helps.


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#3 :: June 30th, 2012 @ 6:29 AM
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I admire your color of choice for this one, this shade of blue isn't commonly used.
Just like what Mortician said, it has potential, but needs a serious work on it. Try improving on these specific areas:

- line art (although it's thin, it's uneven, and somewhat pixelated on some areas).

- flow of the hair (it looks quite un-natural, the hair flowing looks stiff- and for some reason, the fact that the middle part of the flowing hair is thinner than that of the top/bottom part bothers me, some how).

- shading (Subeta requires at least 3-5 layers of shading, yes?).

I hope you'd continue to work on this lovely CW because it really has selling potential, and I'm quite sure that when it reaches Subeta standards, it won't be a problem when it comes to finding buyers. C: