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Nitpick has a minion!

Grumpus the Icalock




Nitpick
Legacy Name: Nitpick


The Glacier Rreign
Owner: Keliora

Age: 11 years, 7 months, 1 week

Born: September 2nd, 2012

Adopted: 11 years, 7 months, 1 week ago

Adopted: September 2nd, 2012

Statistics


  • Level: 94
     
  • Strength: 239
     
  • Defense: 221
     
  • Speed: 221
     
  • Health: 220
     
  • HP: 220/220
     
  • Intelligence: 167
     
  • Books Read: 156
  • Food Eaten: 0
  • Job: Pawnbroker


Self-important know-it-all copyeditors are what is missing in this world
Missing a comma between the opening adjectives.

Which is exactly where Nitpick comes in.
You shouldn't end a sentence in a preposition.

He pays attention to each, and every, detail in a piece of writing.
Unnecessary comma use.

It's a skill he just can't turn off.
Again with the closing preposition?

No matter how much you beg, plead or implore.
You know how I feel about the Oxford comma. ALWAYS USE IT.

Sigh.
Fix the inconsistent use of punctuation and we'll talk about the possibility of this piece seeing the light of day.


Pet Treasure


Edited Script

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English Textbook

Subeta Dictionary I

Subeta Dictionary II

Subeta Dictionary III

The Principles of Grammar

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