This is it! Can Keith save Subeta? Read on!







"I'm tired of these games!" King Keith shouted. "This dragon has destroyed my kingdom and tore my military apart."



"But your majesty," Jack replied, "We need every bit of help possible, and the Colonel just resigned! Now what?"



"I'm going to find that monster," Keith said, "...and teach him a thing or two. It's time Subeta sees the true power of its king!"



As Keith stormed off to find Advarsel, Blake spoke.



"I need to find Colonel Awesome, he shouldn't be too far."



"You go do that, Blake, for all I know, Keith may be in trouble."



They nodded at each other and raced off to find the superpowers. It didn't take more than an hour to find Colonel Awesome, radioing his regiment.



"Sir," Blake begged, "Must you fight with the king now? We need you guys to work together!"



"There will be no working together," Colonel Awesome replied. "The Armada and I are leaving Subeta and we're not telling anyone where. That stubborn brat can rule without me interfering now."



The ground shook beneath them, and there was Advarsel, gazing down at them.



"You two," Advarsel spoke, "WHERE IS YOUR LEADER?"



"WHAT?" Blake shouted. "Advarsel can speak to humans?!"



"Right here," Keith interjected, wand out. "I've had it with you destroying my home. For that, I'm going to destroy you!"



The sky turned to darkness as Keith's eyes turned into a hue of saffron. His wand and hand began to cast as spell as Blake and Jack (who finally found Keith) stared in excitement. The spell grew more powerful by the second. Now an electrical sphere, more than 50 feet in diameter, was in Keith's control.



"Oooh, a fireworks show," Colonel Awesome said.



"SAFFRON SURGE!" Keith shouted, as a blast of electricity was thrown at Advarsel. The dragon disappeared within the yellow haze. As the light faded, Advarsel reappeared.



"IS THAT ALL YOU'VE GOT, YOUR MAJESTY?" Advarsel laughed as he grabbed Keith and held him in front of his face, "I don't know if you have noticed, but my powers surpass the gods. There is no way you can kill me with your magic and cute little costume."



"What ...do you want from ...us?" Keith asked.



"Make me the king and deity of Subeta," Advarsel replied. "If you stop wasting my time, I may not kill you. Refuse now, and I WILL kill you."



"Sir!" Jack shouted to Colonel Awesome, "You have to help him! Keith's in trouble."



"Actually," Colonel Awesome said, "Let them keep going. Let's see if Keith really as strong as he says he is."



"Well..." Advarsel spoke again, waiting for Keith's reply.



"Kill me if you want, you're not taking Subeta. Over my dead body." Keith said.



Colonel Awesome saw the regiment approach.



"Attack the monster now!" he ordered.



The aircraft starting firing at Advarsel. The dragon lost grip of Keith as he turned and was thrown through an open window. Luckily, he landed on a bed in one room, scaring the inhabitants inside.



"Sorry guys," Keith told them.



As missiles were being fired at Advarsel, Colonel Awesome looked up at the attack in frustration. "This isn't working! Retreat, retreat!" Colonel Awesome ordered.



Advarsel growled at them and backed away. "I'M GOING TO FIND YOUR GODDESS AND TAKE HER OUT FIRST. MAYBE YOU'LL BE LESS RESISTANT AFTER SHE'S DEAD. I'LL BE BACK FOR YOU LATER!"



He shot up into the sky and disappeared.



"He must be going to the Sacred Lands to challenge Shinwa. If Shinwa dies, Subeta's magical source does as-"



He received a transmission and turned to Blake.



"You know those destroyed tablets you found? My team finally put the pieces together, but they can't make out the final portion of the text."



"...But I can," smiled Blake. "Why?"



"Apparently," Colonel Awesome said, "the Krypts are linked to Advarsel."






Jack Cardale Plushie




STORY ARCHIVES



ACT ONE: The Trouble Begins



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ACT TWO: The Legend Comes to Life



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Posted by Quetzal

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hiya... interesting story <img src=/images/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif border=0>
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everdear

Awww, this was cute ^.^
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<br>When I read this >>"Oooh, a fireworks show," Colonel Awesome said.<< I almost felt off my chair xD
<br>Good work, guys, go and save Subeta ^^ Yay!
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"Oooh, a fireworks show"
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<br>That was funny xD. The changing colour of King Keiths hair... Make a plushie of Advarsel!
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honey_bear

Advarsel doesn't scare me.
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<br>What scares me is Keith's glowing yellow eyes!!
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Luckily, he landed on a bed in one room, scaring the inhabitants inside. "Sorry guys," Keith told them.
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<br>LMAO. That is...amazing... *cracking up*
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Reku,I agree with you.
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<br>Better than being eaten by him.
<br>;P
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<i>Someone call Richard Dean Anderson, we've got a situation ;P</i>
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<br>Exactly.
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<br>- stares at the eyes some more -
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Cydewinder

Someone call Richard Dean Anderson, we've got a situation ;P
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Sunnie

Pfft, I bet if you just threw a rock at Advarsel he'd run away. :3
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Reku

Go Advarsel!
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<br>What, I think he'd make an excellent ruler. =Gets shot= x.x
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Dhuman

Red hair owns! (I was wondering why the pics weren't coming up xD Thanks for correcting that so every one can see)
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keith you should of tooken him down right there. now you're gonna have to say sorry to Shinwa.
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Dhuman

"he turned and was thrown through an open window. Luckily, he landed on a bed in one room, scaring the inhabitants inside"
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<br>Replace thrown by Dragon with I jumped off a tree for no good reason once, and that happened to me XD Really, I'm not messing around. I'm glad I made it too the bed though and not the ground. Any way, this is getting good! *eats popcorn of goodness and butter*
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Quetzal

My bad, the extensions on those are .jpg, not .gif XD
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<br>Here:
<br>http://www.subeta.org/images/plot_surge.jpg
<br>http://www.subeta.org/images/plot_surge2.jpg
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Quetzal

http://www.subeta.org/images/plot_surge.gif
<br>http://www.subeta.org/images/plot_surge2.gif
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<br>Blonde and red haired Keithy XD
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Keith. Is. A. Goa'uld.
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<br>SEE THE EYE GLOW?!
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<br>- shifty eyes -
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Quetzal

CHANGING KEITH'S HAIR AGAIN
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Brenton

Keith can like SO beat that Advarsel, hunk of evilness. <img src=/images/smilies/6398_emoticon_confused.gif border=0>
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Quetzal

Whats this? Keith's treasure chest has grown 1 size!
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<br>ON THIS PAGE. COOL.
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Keith

I could totally take the thing.
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<br>I just didn't want to seem too godmodey.
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<br>duh.
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XDDDD
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<br>Boy, Keith looks so...*is at a loss for adjectives*
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<br>Kewl. *pokes Keith's eyeballs*
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