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Cyder
Legacy Name: Cyder


The Custom Glacier Montre
Owner: Acidtongue

Age: 8 years, 3 months, 3 days

Born: January 20th, 2016

Adopted: 8 years, 3 months, 3 days ago

Adopted: January 20th, 2016

Statistics


  • Level: 77
     
  • Strength: 149
     
  • Defense: 125
     
  • Speed: 131
     
  • Health: 125
     
  • HP: 125/125
     
  • Intelligence: 11
     
  • Books Read: 6
  • Food Eaten: 0
  • Job: Unemployed


I fully understand you can not access your laptop. I'm not asking you to work on this right away and not expecting anything. I just thought since I had the time I'd send it to you know. I do hope you're having some fun. It's actually a really nice day out here. For Leeloo's story she is actually exp#84. She's the pet of a little girl, close to dog in personality. The girl, her parents, her uncle, and Leeloo all live in a mansion. This story takes place during a zombie apocalypse BUT there isnt mention of zombies. It's just something that maybe the audience will pick up and explain's somethings during the story. The last character is Lily. Lily[/url is Alice's doll. Alice is the little girl of course and around 8-9 years of age. Lily isnt a creepy doll. During the story she talks to Leeloo like a person would but all Leeloo replies is like that of a dog would. I want Leeloo to have like human thoughts where we here what's she thinking but she can't actually talk. The doll can't actually talk tho either that's just her imagination. Very first line=""LeeeeeelooOOOoo" Her voice still echos though this house. So in the beginning we have Leeloo looking for Alice. It's been a few days since she's been able to find her. We figure out what happened in another pet's story. She searches the library where Alice's parents read to her, the kitchen where Alice would convince the cook to sneak her desserts and snacks early but the cook left along time ago, Leeloo makes a note here that most of the staff left around the same time. Searches halls ways, rooms, etc. She goes back then to Alice's room. A normal little girl's room in a mansion. Spacious and filled with toys. The main note here is all the Quentin stuff. Posters, plushies, even a wig that Alice would put on and chase Leeloo with. A voice come's from the bed. "Still no luck then?" Lilo is on the bed. Leeloo jumps up. Both are obviously worried about Alice. Staring at the stuff in the room that's when Leeloo gets the idea that maybe Alice ran off to find Quentin. While some girls obsessed over ponies and princesses, Alice would rather meet Quentin. Seeing Quentin as a magical being of magic, Alice loved everything about Quentin. Her parents would make up stories for bedtime always involving the magical creature. Alice's father once, after begging from Alice, marked the spot on the giant map in the library. !! The Map !! Leeloo and Lily both get the idea to go find Alice and Quentin. They head to the library and check out the map. Not exactly sure where to go they get the general idea. Leeloo places out a small blanket and starts placing items for the journey. Mainly Quentin-themed toys and plushies plus a little bit of food. This isnt much food left and Leeloo wanted to save some for Alice's uncle. He scares Leeloo and always hated when Alice would go visit him and bring him supper. Leeloo could would here the wings of birds coming from the room. Back to the blanket, it's now too much stuff for Leeloo to carry. Lily rationalizes with Leeloo that Alice won't need the toys since she'll have the real thing already. Leeloo is sad to leave them behind since she feels like sad already since she was left behind but decideds Lily is right and leaves the house with Lily on her back and a small cloth with some food around her neck. K done. The rest is pretty open from here. Rather it not be too cliche though yea didn't give you much here to work with. Leeloo doesn't know what's normal really only living much in the mansion so much of this will be new to her so like she come's to a city that's deserted where for her that's how it's suppose to be but us we know that somethings wrong. Not so obvious as saying 'deserted city' but yea you're great like that. Then sometime during the story would like humans trying to capture her/zombies trying to eat her. Leeloo sees them just as humans after her while we...well yea you get the point. All the while Lily talks to her about stuff about what we see and Leeloo replies with nods or whines with body language then she has her own inner thoughts we do hear. Sorry to keep repeating myself here. Just trying to per as precise as possible. The food from the house isn't enough for the whole journey. Which thinking maybe like a 5k story if you're up for it. 3 days, two nights kind of trip since I just don't want them to reach the spot the next day. Speaking of which for the end. Quentin lives in the graveyard and Shadowglen. Rather Shadowglen never be told. More that Leeloo gets the idea of the graveyard from the stories. They look around, of course creeped out. They see a shack/cabin in the middle of the graveyard. Leeloo gets really excited and her hopes up. Pushes the door open. No Alice, no Quentin. The house is tidy even tho littered with random items all around the house the purpose of keeping such a large and varied collection of items neither one can imagine. Then Leeloo senses a presence behind her standing at the door way. So here I want her to describe Quentin. Purple hair, horns, pointy ears, just a bit so the reader knows who it is with out saying it. Lily doesn't say anything here but don't want that she says nothing in the story either. Before Leeloo says anything the being- okay so I noticed that in both stories you did for me someone soft parts the lips. I don't know if you did the on purpose or what but I'd like that in this story too. So how ever you want to write it but creature soft part's the lips and smiles (that make sense? or something) and speaks only one word. The very last word in the story is "HellooOOoo" spoken from Quentin. OOOOOOOOH! See what I did there? Do you? That's as smart as I get sadly but I love it. Please let me know if you get it. :p Anways...longest thing I think I've sent you so far. Ending if you could add some more. Unlike Snod's quick whip and over I'd like Leeloo's to kind of take more time from seeing the building to the end. Get the reader excited aswell then just hang it up a bit. You're good tho so I'm not worried. Sorry if I sent to much. Just got excited. Leeloo is kind of my cursed pet. I've had three different artist do three different versions where once she was even human and a story written for her but never fell in love with so would be great to get this done.

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