Damn, I loved this. The stream of conscious style gave character shape to the words, to the point that I felt almost voyeuristic reading it (which is fantastic)
Litmus test. Positive. Acidic. You are acidic in a basic world.Â
I am deteriorating. I am hunger. I don’t speak fluidly. I write incoherently.Â
are some of my favorite lines, I loved the imagery that came out (wanting to steep like tea, stale noodles, snow and spiral staircases) – this was a great read! I enjoyed your writing a lot c: congratulations on the win!
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Litmus test. Positive. Acidic. You are acidic in a basic world.Â
I am deteriorating. I am hunger. I don’t speak fluidly. I write incoherently.Â
are some of my favorite lines, I loved the imagery that came out (wanting to steep like tea, stale noodles, snow and spiral staircases) – this was a great read! I enjoyed your writing a lot c: congratulations on the win!