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Nitpick has a minion!
Grumpus the Icalock
Grumpus the Icalock
Nitpick
Legacy Name: Nitpick
The Glacier Rreign
Owner: Keliora
Age: 11 years, 7 months, 2 weeks
Born: September 2nd, 2012
Adopted: 11 years, 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Adopted: September 2nd, 2012
Statistics
- Level: 94
- Strength: 239
- Defense: 221
- Speed: 221
- Health: 220
- HP: 220/220
- Intelligence: 167
- Books Read: 156
- Food Eaten: 0
- Job: Pawnbroker
Missing a comma between the opening adjectives.
Which is exactly where Nitpick comes in.
You shouldn't end a sentence in a preposition.
He pays attention to each, and every, detail in a piece of writing.
Unnecessary comma use.
It's a skill he just can't turn off.
Again with the closing preposition?
No matter how much you beg, plead or implore.
You know how I feel about the Oxford comma. ALWAYS USE IT.
Sigh.
Fix the inconsistent use of punctuation and we'll talk about the possibility of this piece seeing the light of day.
Pet Treasure
Edited Script
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English Textbook
Subeta Dictionary I
Subeta Dictionary II
Subeta Dictionary III
The Principles of Grammar
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