Pet Spotlight - Gabriella
Gabriella has won the Pet Spotlight!
Posted by SubetaTeam
Scarlett
Ohh Congrats Lauren!! Gabriella is lovely! The profile and art is so nice and I quite liked the story. <3
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fawn_835
Oh my gosh. This was just so unexpected (:
Thank you Hope ♥️
KB02, you're totally right, her story was written rather quickly, and i haven't recently edited but i'll get onto that asap c:
Thank you Hope ♥️
KB02, you're totally right, her story was written rather quickly, and i haven't recently edited but i'll get onto that asap c:
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Hope
She's lovely, congratulations Lauren!
KB02, it is generally frowned upon here to leave disapproving comments about the winner in this section, since she already won and has therefore been deemed worthy of winning. But there are plenty of people on the Pets and the Writing forums looking for critiques if you would like to help out.
KB02, it is generally frowned upon here to leave disapproving comments about the winner in this section, since she already won and has therefore been deemed worthy of winning. But there are plenty of people on the Pets and the Writing forums looking for critiques if you would like to help out.
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KB02
The story line is nice, but it seems garbled. Not well put together. There are also multiple grammar errors. The art is pretty though. Congratulations
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