Pet Spotlight - Galvin
Galvin the Nightmare Telenine has won the Pet Spotlight!
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Paula
Thank you @Chrysariel, English is not my first language and it is really tricky sometimes! Really appreciate it ^^ <3
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Chrysariel
Congrats! The profile is well done, and the art is cool. But I really loved the story. Just a couple typos:
My parents were there, and I teared them apart... And then there she was, the one being that despite being as light... one that weighted the most on my mind.
S/B My parents were there, and I tore them apart... And then there she was, the one spirit/person/entity that despite being as light... one that weighed the most on my mind.
My parents were there, and I teared them apart... And then there she was, the one being that despite being as light... one that weighted the most on my mind.
S/B My parents were there, and I tore them apart... And then there she was, the one spirit/person/entity that despite being as light... one that weighed the most on my mind.
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Thundercracker
WOOT!! Check it! Congrats Haiku! Galvin is awesome! And a trophy to prove it. ^_^ *hugs*
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