Posted by Keith
Load this on 🆕 Kumos site
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GURL, THIS IS GETTIN' SCURY.

i cant even click on the link because there is nothing i can click on<img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_sad.gif" border="0" />
OMM. A Who-did-it? Seriously? Oh please. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_confused.gif" border="0" />!
It was me. BP
It was me. BP
Oh this is so awesome. I love Subeta event plots. They get better every year.
lol at Peach with the clip!
lol at Peach with the clip!
<img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_shocked.gif" border="0" /> BUMBUMBUM
QUICK, GET THE EPPES BROTHERS ON THE CASE. (Aka Charlie and Don. ...If no one gets the Numb3rs reference, I will cry.) ... WAIT. GET MATT PARKMAN. HE'LL CONFIRM IT WAS SYLAR. (There's a gash. On his head. Who puts gashes in people's heads? Sylar, the world's sexiest eater-of-brains.)
(Note: I watch too much TV.)
(Note: I watch too much TV.)

AWESOME PLOT. I knew the masquerade had to be awesome this year! I wasn't expecting a whodunnit though. Actually, I was kind of expecting the surprise to be Vernon's surprise. X3
Then again, Subetan plot-lines are always exciting, so I should have known SOMETHING really dramatic would happen. |D
So; hurrah for interactive murder mystery! <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />
Then again, Subetan plot-lines are always exciting, so I should have known SOMETHING really dramatic would happen. |D
So; hurrah for interactive murder mystery! <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />


The darker part on the page really works to get that lights out feel conveyed. Excellent job with both the story and the drawings. The plot thickens alright.
Inspector Thorpe is badass :3
And what if there's no murder? Maybe that's the big surprise Vernon has been talking about? Would be kinda morbid: Surprise! I killed myself! xD
And what if there's no murder? Maybe that's the big surprise Vernon has been talking about? Would be kinda morbid: Surprise! I killed myself! xD
Meh... I doubt it's either Victoria or Adriette, for some reason. Or Garrett for that matter, what reason would he have to want the guy dead.
Maybe the Chancellor : 0 Vernon might have had some secret he wanted to get hold of... LOL
Maybe the Chancellor : 0 Vernon might have had some secret he wanted to get hold of... LOL

Well at first i thought it might have been Isaac...
i suspect the Inspector, because he arrived so quickly and i don't know, he is a douche. hahaha.
Also Victoria, because of the story line about Vernon getting distant, not inviting her over as much and all that jazz.
And one of the obvious suspects is Jules..
i'm really suspecting Garret now because of Jules profile information about him...
i suspect the Inspector, because he arrived so quickly and i don't know, he is a douche. hahaha.
Also Victoria, because of the story line about Vernon getting distant, not inviting her over as much and all that jazz.
And one of the obvious suspects is Jules..
i'm really suspecting Garret now because of Jules profile information about him...

<b>Quote:</b><blockquote style="padding:5px; line-height:15px; background-color: #FAFFFF; border: 1px solid #000000; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;">Where's Inspector Gadget when you need him?</blockquote>
Ded, or at least his voice actor is. :c
Ded, or at least his voice actor is. :c
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-major Detective Conan fan-
WOOT. I can't wait to see how the story goes <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" /> For me, there's only three real suspects (Adriette, Jules, Victoria).
- It could be Adriette, 'cause she was trying to seduce Vernon but he just walked away, so maybe there was an accident with her trying to get him to dance.
- Jules was mad at him for all that non-caring father-son relationship stuff, so he might've done something.
- And Victoria because she was trying to dance with Isaac, but I kind of doubt it... dunno.
Marcel, Garret and whoever I'm not naming are probably not suspects unless there was a secret argument or relationship or something that made them want to kill Vernon. Or maybe it is Marcel, since he is his 'lifelong partner' or something. Hmm!
WOOT. I can't wait to see how the story goes <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" /> For me, there's only three real suspects (Adriette, Jules, Victoria).
- It could be Adriette, 'cause she was trying to seduce Vernon but he just walked away, so maybe there was an accident with her trying to get him to dance.
- Jules was mad at him for all that non-caring father-son relationship stuff, so he might've done something.
- And Victoria because she was trying to dance with Isaac, but I kind of doubt it... dunno.
Marcel, Garret and whoever I'm not naming are probably not suspects unless there was a secret argument or relationship or something that made them want to kill Vernon. Or maybe it is Marcel, since he is his 'lifelong partner' or something. Hmm!
How Clue-ish of you. :O
It was Colonel Mustard in the Observatory with the Knife, of course!
I'm looking forward to this. ^^
And "Plot" isn't a Neopets word. /:
It was Colonel Mustard in the Observatory with the Knife, of course!
I'm looking forward to this. ^^
And "Plot" isn't a Neopets word. /:
We should TAKE BACK "Guild" from Neopets while we are at it. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_raspberry.gif" border="0" />
KEEF. Don't call it a plot. That makes it sound too Neopets-ish.
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I didn't realize neopets invented the word plot... All this time I thought plot was normally a term associated with books or movies. Guess neopets copyrighted the word. Oh well can't use that word anymore <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_raspberry.gif" border="0" />
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I didn't realize neopets invented the word plot... All this time I thought plot was normally a term associated with books or movies. Guess neopets copyrighted the word. Oh well can't use that word anymore <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_raspberry.gif" border="0" />

Keith
STAFF
How does the word PLOT sound too neopetish? It's a plot.
2.
Also called storyline. the plan, scheme, or main story of a literary or dramatic work, as a play, novel, or short story.
2.
Also called storyline. the plan, scheme, or main story of a literary or dramatic work, as a play, novel, or short story.
KEEF. Don't call it a plot. That makes it sound too Neopets-ish.
>_> Call it... The Masquerade Mystery. It's alliterative, which always sounds cool, and it avoids Neopian references.
>_> Call it... The Masquerade Mystery. It's alliterative, which always sounds cool, and it avoids Neopian references.
That one dancer is just like "...><img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_sad.gif" border="0" />"

The Inspector sounds like a jerk...and incompetent. He asks prime suspects to leave and doesn't keep tabs on them?
The artwork accompanying the story is beautiful <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" /> The picture of the dancers looking up in confusion as the lights went out is gorgeous.
LOL, an old-school locked-in-the-mansion whodunnit. Sweet.
Yeah, Adriette is Miss Scarlet. Me I always preferred Mrs. White...
Yeah, Adriette is Miss Scarlet. Me I always preferred Mrs. White...

Haha.. the inspector did it.
After all, he did show up surprisingly fast given the immediateness of the situation.
After all, he did show up surprisingly fast given the immediateness of the situation.


I'm so excited. This will be my very first plot on Subeta!
Also: "Invalid link" is what shows up when I click.
Also: "Invalid link" is what shows up when I click.
