Pet Spotlight - Lard



Lard the Nostalgic Dillema has won the Pet Spotlight!
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Load this on 🆕 Kumos site
Celestial
I didn't read the original story, but judging by what others have said, this ending is better~ Loved the pun. And agree that a custom overlay of the meats would be super awesome; the art is so well done and the pet deserves an awesome display! Congrats on the win.
teacup132
@Destiny Congrats on the win! Have you thought of a custom overlay for your pet? The pet page image does more justice than the blue balloon.
JOJO
thank u for listening to criticism and changing the story. this ending is a lot better, and i love the little pun at the end (-:
Destiny STAFF
And I wanted to let everyone know that I have updated the story. And this way, I can do an origin story that is based in fantasy rather than based on a frightening part of history/present.
Destiny STAFF
Fwiw, and sure it is not much, I did not mean to make light of mental health. I admit at the time I wrote that, I had been watching Suckerpunch and I think that is why it came into the story. I really meant for it to focus on the unlikely friendship between Lard and his owner. Once I get to an actual computer where I can make changes, I will be removing those elements. Again, I did not intend on hurting anyone.
meowth
the overlay is cute but.... yeah i'm gonna have to agree that the whole "hur hur it's funny because he's ~CRAZY~ XD" thing isn't good at all. it's 2019 lol sorry
far
I'm all for writing freedom, but I wasn't expecting that ending.
I'll say I'm uncomfortable. Nevertheless, congratulation. The overlay is very adorable.
Brivet
the idea and overlay are pretty great!!
but, I dunno. that twist ending of 'see it's funny/scary cause he has psychosis' felt uncomfortable.
Balloon
Oh... oh dear. ^X^;
Dramatic
Congrats, I liked the story!
Vinushka
That was bizarre but lots of fun. I love dark things that are cute at the same time.
Destin
I was confused near the end..Am I the only one who didn't understand?
Congrats though. ^^
thoughtful
Hah! I was happy at first just to see a nostalgic dillema (so cute), but the profile and overlay are just... one hell of a picnic.
eye
I'm with ABEL, especially toward the paragraph at end of the story. Uncomfortable read, I gotta say.
demon
super not a fan off this pet, sorry destiny.
Chrysariel
Congrats! love the art and its something to think about...
bobbins
I've never been so unsettled by a balloon.
SongSparra
I'm not sure if I should laugh or back slowly away but either way it's super cool and strangely interesting, congrats on the win!

@Vioran_Soldier You saw that episode of Myth Busters too ;)
Jovi
Congrats, the overlay is supes cute! XD
Julie
Cute profile and story. :) Congrats!!
February30th
Even lead ballons float.

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