The scribe that has been detailing the events of the omen islands to this point, has added another page to his book.
Posted by Keith
Load this on 🆕 Kumos site
sorry for empty comment.
I really enjoy the story!
and i love being on the islanders side! I'm with you Priest, lets kill the girl! >D
I really enjoy the story!
and i love being on the islanders side! I'm with you Priest, lets kill the girl! >D
....So, I sided with the bad guys after all? ._.;;
Oh well, Songaa is still the hottest NPC EVA and I still strongly support Matlana~<img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_heart.gif" border="0" />
However, I was never a big fan of Kahashakalaka, so I'm not surprised. >c
Oh well, Songaa is still the hottest NPC EVA and I still strongly support Matlana~<img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_heart.gif" border="0" />
However, I was never a big fan of Kahashakalaka, so I'm not surprised. >c
I really want to say that once you open up something like this there is sometimes opinions that are put. They can be positive or "not so positive feedback"-I don't really care for that much at all*shrugs* Yet, this IS a public area of the site, is it not? Anyways I just wanted to know if this really is the longest plot right now/ if is coolio!
oh what has caused this "priest" to be so inhumane. i feel betrayed choosing the side of islanders. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_sigh.gif" border="0" />
1. Dirty Matty's pirate rep is suffering <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_shocked.gif" border="0" />
2. The writers finally made me care that Amy was in danger, three thumbs up!
3. Kaha is a mindless drone.
2. The writers finally made me care that Amy was in danger, three thumbs up!
3. Kaha is a mindless drone.
I have been avidly reading the account of the islanders and pirates, and can hardly wait until the next part is released. May I say the story has been beautifully illustrated (congratulations to the artist/s) and the thrill aspect is still high. Not too long before the next part please - I can hardly wait.
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great plot........<img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" />
Just loving that the story is still going on <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" />
It really is so beautifully done
Count me as one contented Subetan... no whining here lol
It really is so beautifully done
Count me as one contented Subetan... no whining here lol
GO KAHA... damn it, an Islander all this time and i can still never remember how to stop spelling his name.
Drown the brat and we can have Emma back <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />
Drown the brat and we can have Emma back <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />
great storyline and wonderful graphics yet again...can't wait for the next instalment... <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />
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Wow, this is great <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" /> I'm loving the drawings and the story line is nice to read, seeing as I don't really read books or anything like that. I was actually intrigued, just because pirates and island stuff is epic. xD
Once again, loving the illustrations ^^
As a newbie who joined when the non-battle achievements of this event were just ending, I haven't really felt connected with it all that much, simply because I really couldn't/didn't know how to do anything for my team. So yeah, to me this feels like dragging on. Maybe it wouldn't if both battle and non-battle sides of the event went on simultaneously for a shorter amount of time.
In any case, waiting to see the final strokes to this painting <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" />
As a newbie who joined when the non-battle achievements of this event were just ending, I haven't really felt connected with it all that much, simply because I really couldn't/didn't know how to do anything for my team. So yeah, to me this feels like dragging on. Maybe it wouldn't if both battle and non-battle sides of the event went on simultaneously for a shorter amount of time.
In any case, waiting to see the final strokes to this painting <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" />
Overall Comment: I absolutely love the story <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_happy.gif" border="0" /> Even though I chose Islander... frowns I'm a good Islander - really... >.> <.< The artwork was great and the writing was... decent enough. I, too, found it switching around a bit.
@FaithReborn: If a writer depended solely on inspiration, they wouldn't be a good writer. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_sad.gif" border="0" />
@FaithReborn: If a writer depended solely on inspiration, they wouldn't be a good writer. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_sad.gif" border="0" />
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oh, though i had quite a lot to say i forgot one thing i wanted to write for a long time: think about what the average user wants and thinks and does, include this into your plot, prizes (not a must), length, story maybe, and then stick to it, no matter what - there will always be some who will be unhappy with something.
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ovation - i haven't been that long a member of subeta - 1,5 years to be exact. there still has been a long time when nothing went well and nothing was going on. then there were changes and i like being here (i always did - but there were times when it wasn't that easy). but do not forget that though the site gets more and more professional - most people working on subeta are not professionals - but they do care about what "we" have to say.
sometimes they care too much about single statements, but that's my opinion. i would be rather annoyed if such comments like yours would end this plot.
i would agree with you on maybe one thing (don't know if you're thinking the same, and i have to add a big BUUT in the end): the plots are often not well planned. f.e. there are "always" items added somewhere in the middle or end of it all - every complainer is taken seriously, so(?) the RW ended rather abrupt (though i don't know if this was planned) - when somebody demands wigs they will add wigs and so on - though it's quite simple: think about what the average user does and how he feels. though i enjoy every festival it's also a lot of "stress" so "bad news" aren't that good for me and changes within are "annoying" as well.
now comes the BUUT: as mentioned before the stuff are giving their best to make us happy. i can imagine that it isn't that easy for them to interact and to plan things within the team.
we have a lot of plots going on - so basically maybe two persons should just plan plots and nothing else - but i guess there aren't enough people to do so.
so - we have to wait a little and watch the plot develop.
in the meantime one can do what i used to do for about 8 months - restocking, doing wiz' quests, playing games, training my pet.
at least the chrystal shop is now opened 24|7 <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_wink.gif" border="0" />
sometimes they care too much about single statements, but that's my opinion. i would be rather annoyed if such comments like yours would end this plot.
i would agree with you on maybe one thing (don't know if you're thinking the same, and i have to add a big BUUT in the end): the plots are often not well planned. f.e. there are "always" items added somewhere in the middle or end of it all - every complainer is taken seriously, so(?) the RW ended rather abrupt (though i don't know if this was planned) - when somebody demands wigs they will add wigs and so on - though it's quite simple: think about what the average user does and how he feels. though i enjoy every festival it's also a lot of "stress" so "bad news" aren't that good for me and changes within are "annoying" as well.
now comes the BUUT: as mentioned before the stuff are giving their best to make us happy. i can imagine that it isn't that easy for them to interact and to plan things within the team.
we have a lot of plots going on - so basically maybe two persons should just plan plots and nothing else - but i guess there aren't enough people to do so.
so - we have to wait a little and watch the plot develop.
in the meantime one can do what i used to do for about 8 months - restocking, doing wiz' quests, playing games, training my pet.
at least the chrystal shop is now opened 24|7 <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_wink.gif" border="0" />
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Ovation, I understand your concerns, but I point out the following:
There have been intervals in which we have been involved, quite directly. These intervals have occurred (seemingly) at random. The entirety of those Subeta members who "care", as you put it, have been set on the edges of their collective seats to await such intervals.
I humbly suggest that this event is not over, and that one should wait before complaining about the fact that it isn't progressing as well as one might like.
Besides (and this one will piss off the writers, most likely), have you ever heard of Writers' Block?
Maybe they're waiting on inspiration.
There have been intervals in which we have been involved, quite directly. These intervals have occurred (seemingly) at random. The entirety of those Subeta members who "care", as you put it, have been set on the edges of their collective seats to await such intervals.
I humbly suggest that this event is not over, and that one should wait before complaining about the fact that it isn't progressing as well as one might like.
Besides (and this one will piss off the writers, most likely), have you ever heard of Writers' Block?
Maybe they're waiting on inspiration.
For a minute, Ovation, I mistook you for NoirRaven. But even she isn't tacky enough to speak on behalf of an entire site's population.
Dude, you guys, either make it relevant again or let it go. The only reason I care at all is that the Seed Shop is still <i>kaput</i>, it's been so long since we actually got to be involved.
It's starting to come off a lot like someone going on and on about a roleplay they had with their friends that you don't get to watch or participate in. Developments happen, but because you never get to see the entire thing you can't really bring yourself to care. Yes, yes, we know, Pirates Good, Evil Sea Witch Bad. There's no reason for us to care anymore, and updates are coming too irregularly and slowly to be excited about whatsoever.
Take a tip from the writer: either do something to get us to care, or drop it.
It's a good story. Just, it's getting kind of boring because there's nothing I can do about it anymore.
It's starting to come off a lot like someone going on and on about a roleplay they had with their friends that you don't get to watch or participate in. Developments happen, but because you never get to see the entire thing you can't really bring yourself to care. Yes, yes, we know, Pirates Good, Evil Sea Witch Bad. There's no reason for us to care anymore, and updates are coming too irregularly and slowly to be excited about whatsoever.
Take a tip from the writer: either do something to get us to care, or drop it.
It's a good story. Just, it's getting kind of boring because there's nothing I can do about it anymore.
Keith
STAFF
Just remember, that he's got Merana on his side, and I wouldn't write ANYONE off that has someone that powerful pulling his strings <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_wink.gif" border="0" />.
<b>Quote By @Mackenzi:</b><blockquote style="padding:5px; line-height:15px; background-color: #FAFFFF; border: 1px solid #000000; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;">Lol @ Kaha chasing a ship in a canoe. </blockquote>
LOL win. Just pictured the epic race between a giant ship and this hopeless idiot slapping furiously at the water with a paddle, trying in vain to keep up :E
I swear to god if he makes it, and BOARDS the ship, I will have no doubt in my mind that he can defy the laws of physics. And just what is he going to do after he gets on that boat, hm? Smack at the entire crew of blade-laden pirates with a boat oar and retake the child hostage to escape in a floating cannon target? Kaz needs his facts straight. Maybe I'm delving into this too deeply, but it's funny as hell now.
LOL win. Just pictured the epic race between a giant ship and this hopeless idiot slapping furiously at the water with a paddle, trying in vain to keep up :E
I swear to god if he makes it, and BOARDS the ship, I will have no doubt in my mind that he can defy the laws of physics. And just what is he going to do after he gets on that boat, hm? Smack at the entire crew of blade-laden pirates with a boat oar and retake the child hostage to escape in a floating cannon target? Kaz needs his facts straight. Maybe I'm delving into this too deeply, but it's funny as hell now.
The scribe can teleport. He knows the every move of the islanders and pirates at once <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/smiley_xface.gif" border="0" />
Leave the pirates alone, you bowl-cutted queer. They'd be doing just fine if you'd stop being an invasive ass in a loincloth :|
Leave the pirates alone, you bowl-cutted queer. They'd be doing just fine if you'd stop being an invasive ass in a loincloth :|
Arrrr, that nasty Islander! Leave her be, landlubber, ye 'ave no right ta be sacrificin' the innocent little girl!
(Once again, wonderful artwork, and the story is very interesting.)
(Once again, wonderful artwork, and the story is very interesting.)
By the way, who is this SCRIBE DUDE that's writing this book? And how does he know all this stuff?
OH NOES.
I bet HE'S the REAL bad guy!
xD
Kidding.
OH NOES.
I bet HE'S the REAL bad guy!
xD
Kidding.
Oh yes, long page. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_heart.gif" border="0" /> -scurries off to read/admire the lovely artwork- <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" />
can Merana just hurry up and eat her pls. I mean she is just a kid, if she's not in a kennel, eating is a great idea <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" /> J/K J/K... about the kennel part at least. If Merana isn't going to eat her then at least try and take her on as a student or something! Just HURRY UP! LOL
oohh interesting!! I can't wait for the next part <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />
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<b>Quote:</b><blockquote style="padding:5px; line-height:15px; background-color: #FAFFFF; border: 1px solid #000000; font-family: georgia; font-size: 10;">i hope not all of the islanders are bad. some seemed nice. </blockquote>
i hope not all of the pirates are good! <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/smiley_sadface.gif" border="0" />
anyways - i'm curious what will come next! =)
i hope not all of the pirates are good! <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/smiley_sadface.gif" border="0" />
anyways - i'm curious what will come next! =)
WOOOO! New developments! The art is amazing, as always <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />
Aww, Dirty Matty is so adorable :p
I wonder what's gonna happen next? Ah, the suspense!
Aww, Dirty Matty is so adorable :p
I wonder what's gonna happen next? Ah, the suspense!
The art is awesome! The only things I can find a fault with is the story changing points of view a couple times, and the feasibilty of Temictzin catching up to what looks like a two masted ship in a boat he has to hand paddle by himself...never gonna happen. Ever.
Still, the plot is quite fun, and I look forward to what comes next. Good work!
Still, the plot is quite fun, and I look forward to what comes next. Good work!
his book...oh well. I was thinking the face painter woman was writing this. that would have been cool.
THE SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE
Why oh awful suspense do you lurk here!? ah well GO fish! at least Amy's having some fun before the terrible...
I'm super excited. The suspense is killing me WHY CLIFFHANGERS? <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/smiley_sadface.gif" border="0" />
AHA! I knew us pirates were nice deep down! Hehe...hope our mangy crew can manage to keep poor little Amy safe while fighting Levia <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_shocked.gif" border="0" />
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Told ya those no good Islanders were evil.
Ye don' be seein' us Pirates sidin' with no barnacle-blasted Dark Goddess o' th' seas, do ye?
Arrr!
Ye don' be seein' us Pirates sidin' with no barnacle-blasted Dark Goddess o' th' seas, do ye?
Arrr!
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Aww =D Amy and the bunch is so cute!
Awwww Matty is so cuuute.<br/>I still think Amy is creepy and Merana can have her. BUT AWW MATTTY ILU ♥
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Aww Amy and Matty xP They're so great together with go fish xD
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OMG. AMY LOVES GO FISH TOO??
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oooh interesting !
It's starting to come off a lot like someone going on and on about a roleplay they had with their friends that you don't get to watch or participate in. Developments happen, but because you never get to see the entire thing you can't really bring yourself to care. Yes, yes, we know, Pirates Good, Evil Sea Witch Bad. There's no reason for us to care anymore, and updates are coming too irregularly and slowly to be excited about whatsoever.
Take a tip from the writer: either do something to get us to care, or drop it.
It's a good story. Just, it's getting kind of boring because there's nothing I can do about it anymore. </blockquote>
I like it and think it's awesome. And it seems a lot of people feel the same way. I'm not entirely convinced that the islanders are all that bad, and I want to see what Merana plans to do and if Shinwa will get involved.
So if you don't like the story then maybe just don't read it? Not like you're being forced with a gun to your head. It's not like the rest of your life revolves around the goings on of Subeta.
So either STFU or GTFO, please.