It's time for another revamp poll. This time the Paralix is looking forward to your constructive comments and critique.
Posted by Luxe
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I really like this revamp, it's so pretty O.o I would just go easy on the whiskers, the curl is a bit extreme, and I woul raise the front leg that's closest to us - like someone else suggested. Other than that, it's great.
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do it do it
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I can't believe I never noticed this before!
Or that I noticed, commented, then forgot o.O
Either way~ I love it! The only change I would suggest is to ease up on the whisker curl. Other than that it's perfect! I hope the reborn and chibi ones are as lovely as this one -hinthint- <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_wink.gif" border="0" />
Or that I noticed, commented, then forgot o.O
Either way~ I love it! The only change I would suggest is to ease up on the whisker curl. Other than that it's perfect! I hope the reborn and chibi ones are as lovely as this one -hinthint- <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_wink.gif" border="0" />
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i think the front legs look a little too short in proportion to everything else, but other than that it looks fine.
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This revamp is genius! The only thing I would suggest is to have the tail between the legs, not all the way in the back like Madhatter (and probably others) suggested. But I love it. SO MUCH. <333
I also want to see a new grave yard paralix. ^w^ Make it beautiful as the original looking paralix.
I love this revamp. The fur on its legs needs to connect more though. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" /> I have to disagree with TheLoneTiel about the snout. It does not need to be wider.
this is beautifl, the only suggestion i have is raise the hackles a bit more to make it snarl more <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" />
That is amazing! I love its face especially, and hope that doesn't change. The earlier suggestions for the legs could help make it look even better, but I'd be very happy to have this revamp as-is.
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Wow... some people sure are nit-picky, geez... the pet looks gorgeous as it is. I love it! I hope it goes through.
Amazing. It's the same, but newer... Sameness!!!!! Love that the pose was kept. Adore the little ankle tufts. MINE!!! Looks like the proportional oddities were also squished into almost correctness. I wantz teh tummy!!! snurgle
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COOL SEND ME ONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this revamp!! A lot better than the Galactic Paralix for sure. It's still nice and fuzzy, the pose is still nice and chaotic, it still has that wild grin... Bravo to the artist for preserving the current feel while still updating the artwork!!
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I agree with Naya, if y'all can't find something besides poses to criticized on like coloring or line thickness, at least give the artist some praise for doing a revamp. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/smiley_sadface.gif" border="0" /> If he/she did, you'd be stuck with none. So be grateful!
The only thing I can say is that everything is great but the whiskers could be a little bit think from the nose and thinner when ending. Like Ryushay(on deviantart)'s Chisalu ref: http://ryushay.deviantart.com/art/Reference-Chisalu-95463830
The only thing I can say is that everything is great but the whiskers could be a little bit think from the nose and thinner when ending. Like Ryushay(on deviantart)'s Chisalu ref: http://ryushay.deviantart.com/art/Reference-Chisalu-95463830
Well, I love this revamp. and I was looking though what other people had to say, and I honestly didn't like THEIR criticisms. Its a whole lot of anal people that cant take a good thing with out finding something wrong with it.
Shrugs
And here I was looking forward to making a post that just said "Yus." <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_raspberry.gif" border="0" />
Shrugs
And here I was looking forward to making a post that just said "Yus." <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_raspberry.gif" border="0" />
I don't quite like the face - something about the shape of the top of the muzzle and the far brow ridge bugs me a little. Everything else is epic win, though.
I think everyone who is trying to improve this image with pictures of their own are just splitting hairs. You arent really changing anything at all, guys. So why even make a post about it? They are so subtle, nobody notices what you've "Improved". <br /><br /> Anyways, I -don't- think the Paralix is supposed to be doglike. It's a sort of dragon, not a dog. The Paralix sort of reminds me of a cross between a chinese air dragon, a kirin, and a Fu dog (Not actually a dog, but a chinese guardian lion). The style is just less extreme and more unique. While it doesn't look like a lion either, the colours, fur, muscle and ears seem similar to the Fu. The chinese dragon is very slender and has the whiskers, and the kirin has the horns and mane. <br /> And I know it isnt any of those things, it's a Paralix. But to me, I just don't see where people are finding a dog in this creature, and I aso don't understand why they are trying to point out mistakes that arent there. xD
I too edited little things that bugged me. ^^
<img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v45/thelonetiel/destinedtodie/paralix.gif border="0"> <img src=http://subeta.net/images/paralix.jpg border="0">
Mine - Revamp
My biggest gripe was that the fur tufts weren't properly anchored in the legs, except for the bent front leg. I also made the mouth more of a grin (made the corner of the mouth less rounded), added proper canines (at the expense of the other teeth, oh well), made the muzzle more dog like (wider and the nose taller), and defined the right front wrist a little more, which I think helps a tad bit.
Tiny edits, which tells how good the original is!
Looking at other edits, I agree the tail should be moved down (there is room) or put in front of the back hind leg, the spirals in the whiskers could be toned down, and the front paws could use a few more tweaks. It looks great though, I want to see it a reality!
This is probably too late, but I didn't have time to post it after making the edits a few days ago. ^^
<img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v45/thelonetiel/destinedtodie/paralix.gif border="0"> <img src=http://subeta.net/images/paralix.jpg border="0">
Mine - Revamp
My biggest gripe was that the fur tufts weren't properly anchored in the legs, except for the bent front leg. I also made the mouth more of a grin (made the corner of the mouth less rounded), added proper canines (at the expense of the other teeth, oh well), made the muzzle more dog like (wider and the nose taller), and defined the right front wrist a little more, which I think helps a tad bit.
Tiny edits, which tells how good the original is!
Looking at other edits, I agree the tail should be moved down (there is room) or put in front of the back hind leg, the spirals in the whiskers could be toned down, and the front paws could use a few more tweaks. It looks great though, I want to see it a reality!
This is probably too late, but I didn't have time to post it after making the edits a few days ago. ^^
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simply gorgeous. close to the old artwork, maintained all the characteristics and personality- I am le stunned. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" /> no need for further suggestions, if the foot is 3 inches further to the right or the moustache thingie more or less curled- whatever, personal taste and nitpick (no offense to those who suggested it); imo it's pretty much close to perfect. :33
Gah! it didnt show up! And a sentence got chopped off... i was just saying dont get me wrong, i love the revamp. I just went crazy cause its my first time suggesting edits lol x_X
Ok, here are just some links: The animation
<a href="/redirect.php?url=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv288%2Fyoruhikage%2Fparalixanimgif.gif" target="_new">http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixanimgif.gif</a>
the edit:
<a href="/redirect.php?url=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv288%2Fyoruhikage%2Fparalixedit.jpg" target="_new">http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixedit.jpg</a>
Ok, here are just some links: The animation
<a href="/redirect.php?url=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv288%2Fyoruhikage%2Fparalixanimgif.gif" target="_new">http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixanimgif.gif</a>
the edit:
<a href="/redirect.php?url=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv288%2Fyoruhikage%2Fparalixedit.jpg" target="_new">http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixedit.jpg</a>
I really like this revamp <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" /> I love how you kept the pose. And the mane is a big improvement! Very good job on rendering the fur and bellyscales too <3 I like it better with the bellyscales going up to the neck.
Only a few tiny things bug me... I dunno if you'll still wanna change this or if my input will even get in, but I've always wanted to help out revamp the pets XD So I'll try! Here's my edit:
<img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralix.jpg border="0"> , <img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixedit.jpg border="0">
The original and edited, for comparison... sorry if it happens to stretch the post <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/smiley_sadface.gif" border="0" />
Here is an animation i made for comparison
<img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixanimgif.gif border="0">
5.the farthest front-paw : i shortened it because looking at the other front paw it seemed the space between the wrist and toes wasnt that big. Plus i think it makes the paw's angle look less squarish. (this is just a personal thing too though)
Thats about it. Sorry if its too much! I really like this revamp and its one of the most successful I've witnessed <3 The reason I spazspammed was cause this was my first attempt at helping to do edits XD
(i hope the images work)
Only a few tiny things bug me... I dunno if you'll still wanna change this or if my input will even get in, but I've always wanted to help out revamp the pets XD So I'll try! Here's my edit:
<img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralix.jpg border="0"> , <img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixedit.jpg border="0">
The original and edited, for comparison... sorry if it happens to stretch the post <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/smiley_sadface.gif" border="0" />
Here is an animation i made for comparison
<img src=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/yoruhikage/paralixanimgif.gif border="0">
- For the whiskers, maybe go easy on the curl. I like the idea! But i feel it makes it look too cramped if you curl it so much.
- the visible shoulder (NOTE-i forgot to arrow this in the animation) i think the little line you drew for definition on the shoulder makes the entire appendage pop out too much... not to make it sound funny, but I'd best describe it as looking chicken drumstick-ish. Sorta like its not attatched to the body. What i did was erase the line and lighten the shadow.
- the arm coming off of that shoulder: i moved it to be more like the old paralix's arm position. I feel its just a personal opinion, but it seems that the old position was more dynamic. The new ones good too, but it makes it look less like its jumping or leaping and more like just floating there. I think the leaping look might look cool on this, but others may like the floating more... so this is up to you :3 (plus i lengthened it by just a notch more)
- the farthest back-leg : I feel that its looking a bit rubbery. Perhaps by defining the ankle a bit more might make it less so.
5.the farthest front-paw : i shortened it because looking at the other front paw it seemed the space between the wrist and toes wasnt that big. Plus i think it makes the paw's angle look less squarish. (this is just a personal thing too though)
Thats about it. Sorry if its too much! I really like this revamp and its one of the most successful I've witnessed <3 The reason I spazspammed was cause this was my first attempt at helping to do edits XD
(i hope the images work)
Wow, something actually pretty uncontroversial looking, nice pull guys, smart move keeping it as close to the original as possible. Only crit would be confusing shading on the back legs and the tummy area I really cant understand the fur going on there, but everything else looks fine (nice choice in color too and not screwing with design!)
Excellent job!! This has to be one of my <strong>favorite</strong> revamps ever... If I <i>had</i> to be picky, I might say that the left side legs are just a touch small and disproportionate, but over all, I think it's <strong>excellent</strong>... <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_grin.gif" border="0" />
This is awesome, and will take some getting used to, because I just know no one's going to keep the old one...
But I agree with xxMadxHatterxx about the changes.
But I agree with xxMadxHatterxx about the changes.
Now THIS is the kind of revamps we need. Not only is the art improved, but you kept to what made the pet really shine as a species. I mean, the other revamps were great IMO, but this is what Subeta really needs. Great Job! Maybe add on tweaks already listed by xxMadxHatterxx, but even if you didn't it would still be the best revamp in a while.
This one is so much more elegant and Proud, I love it.
Juuust dont touch the chibi Paralix pleeeeease!
Juuust dont touch the chibi Paralix pleeeeease!
Wow I thought this was the reborn paralix for a moment.. This is so massively awesome looking. -drools-
Oh wow! Absolutely gorgeous! The previous Paralix was lovely, and now it looks even better! So glad you kept the pose- I was very partial to it.
Adore the fur and shading very much! Splendid work, artist!
Adore the fur and shading very much! Splendid work, artist!
wow the detail on the new one makes it look much more realistic! the old one was pretty simplisitc! hawwwwwt!!!!
This is an absolutely amazing revamp! It is so perfect because it is 100% true to it's original character. It hasn't lost its "self" for lack of better words. It be finely tweaked and is absolutely perfect. I don't think any of us could possibly ask for anything more!
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Good job on the new look. <img src="http://images.subeta.net/smilies/6398_emoticon_smile.gif" border="0" />
I really, really like the new revamp. y'know why? Because nothing really changed. <br /> And whats better- Nothing really needed to change to begin with. <br /><br /> So thank you artists for giving the Paralix a nice fresh look without giving it a drastic change. <3
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Wow! Other than the other nitpicks that people below have commented, this is PERFECT. <3 This is how a revamp should be done. You're not completely changing the pet, just updating the art! It's amazing, Keshi, you did a fantastic job. I want a Paralix now like omfgbad. I've got one slot left, and I think your Paralix just filled it. <333
other then that... no complains! ^^
it's a pretty revamp.
aw man... let's see how GY will turn out... still a bit fear left ._.